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Two Minutes [LIF2018] Non-Writer

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posted on Dec, 7 2018 @ 11:15 PM
We all get about two minutes to live.
Breathing resets the clock.
The bathroom floor is cool.
A momentary lapse from the sweltering days that make up my life.
I think on the absurdity of it all and laugh.
Another drag from the cigarette.
Perhaps it is time for bed.
edit on 8-12-2018 by SupermassiveBlackHOLE because: Just changed the spacing in a sentence

posted on Dec, 8 2018 @ 02:59 AM
Nice work, keep on sharing.

posted on Dec, 8 2018 @ 03:57 AM
a reply to: SupermassiveBlackHOLE

I like that a lot and got a scent of the Ginsbergs.

posted on Dec, 8 2018 @ 03:16 PM
damn, I got an immense sense of sadness and struggle.

time for me to be thankful for the small things again.

posted on Dec, 8 2018 @ 03:58 PM
Thanks dreaming. I appreciate!!!

To be compared to the great Ginsberg is an honor to say the least. - Kandinsky

ClovenSky- I hope it didn't get you too down.
Though sadness is an emotion just like any other.
If I was able to invoke a feeling like that,
I suppose I did something right !

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