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Twice I Failed And There poems..

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posted on Dec, 30 2016 @ 08:38 AM

Twice I Failed

Yesterday, I thought my life was over,
That I'd missed the chance to show her,
Everything she meant to me,
Thought I'd missed the opportunity.

So forlorn was I, wrapped in despair,
All those feelings, I'd wanted to share,
Thoughts that I had wished to convey,
Well... I let those moments slip away.

And now that I know I'm gonna live,
All those emotions that I had to give,
The thoughts and words I wanted to say,
I'll just save them for another day.

So relieved that I wasn't on deaths door,
I lived my life like never before,
And yet, still...I never said those words,
It seems like they will never get heard.

Time for me is up once more,
And I'm in despair, like I was before,
Twice I could've shown my feelings now,
But I failed to speak those words somehow....


And There

And there... I saw her silhouette,
The outer shell of who she was.
A cryptic, unsolved mystery and yet,
I tried solving it like everyone does.

Such a riddle she turned out to be,
So simple was her way of thought.
But I knew for certain, quite assuredly,
Who I felt she was, she really was not.

Had I taken anytime to see,
More then what her shadow cast,
I might've saw past the mystery,
and solved the puzzle at long last.

But I only saw her silhouette there,
Only cared about her outer shell.
I never tried nor did I even care,
To see the other beauty that she held.


posted on Dec, 30 2016 @ 08:52 AM
a reply to: blend57

I like 'em both.
Not just words in display but feelings.

posted on Dec, 30 2016 @ 09:16 AM
a reply to: blend57

Vulcan mind melds are science fiction.

When it comes down to it. People don't really know each other, as they know themselves.

Doing together,
sharing time,
sharing experience,
sharing sights and sounds;

that's what people are
for one another.

posted on Dec, 30 2016 @ 01:16 PM
a reply to: blend57

Really good Blend!

posted on Dec, 31 2016 @ 05:20 PM
a reply to: blend57

Really good Loved this one too.

posted on Dec, 31 2016 @ 09:01 PM
Wonderful! Loved these!

posted on Jan, 1 2017 @ 03:37 PM
Very well written. The feelings were nicely conveyed! Great writings Blend!!!

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