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the apple of my eye

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posted on Dec, 29 2016 @ 02:23 AM

Oh your my Frankenstein
my darling Frankenstein
your my play mate
a good friend of mine
that’s what i tell you
but really your just a pastime
I dress you up and train you
to be just that
plasticine in my hands.
I put the words in your mouth
the smile on your face
your the apple of my eye.
Everything you are
is because of I.
I am the omega
you my omicron.
my child.
Right from the start.

Oh my great I
how fooled you are
I am no Frankenstein
cause I know who you are
It was always just you
right from the start.
spreading your nonsense
far and wide.
Your the I that cannot see
that doesn’t know.
everything you build
is made of just that
ice and snow.
This time I really
just let you go.
Because of my love
I was truly happy
to watch your show.
poor big I
this is my message
I let you go.
Eliberocelta @ Antequera Dic 2016

posted on Dec, 29 2016 @ 02:31 AM
a reply to: ancientthunder

This should have gone in the writing district.

Nice Writing i liked it.

posted on Dec, 29 2016 @ 02:35 AM
Thanks its how I write and how I describe the mind with a touch of conspiracy, which seems to be an inherent part of the human psyche.a reply to: JesusXst

posted on Dec, 29 2016 @ 02:42 AM
a reply to: ancientthunder

An open mind, is a free mind.

That is all we need remember, tis truth.

posted on Dec, 29 2016 @ 02:54 AM
a reply to: ancientthunder

ancientthunder, it has been a pleasure to follow and to read your poems, writings and musings over the years.

thank you for posting here and sharing.

i wish you all the best in further years to come and a happy new year's celebration.

posted on Dec, 29 2016 @ 02:55 AM
a reply to: ancientthunder

Nice job.
Funny how you call our ego: Frankenstein.
Is an awkward thing indeed, that false unseeing I.

posted on Dec, 29 2016 @ 12:31 PM
Thank your for expressing your kindness in such an open way! I wish all the best for you now and may the path you have chosen be fruitful/a reply to: lucia2389

posted on Dec, 29 2016 @ 12:35 PM
Thanks Nothing, thinking of your comment I thought to myself well I suppose the ego has a neverending string of names. Ha ha a reply to: Nothin

edit on 29-12-2016 by ancientthunder because: spelling

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