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Two minutes of a lifetime

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posted on Nov, 4 2016 @ 11:42 PM
Abby sat on her spaceship, finally she was going to meet the mysterious figure who always dressed in black. He had no name, and as soon as he traveled from one world to another the records were always deleted.. It was like someone always hid his path and always watching over him.

Abby followed his every step for the last 5 years, sometimes she was lucky but most often he was already gone, always unreachable, always untouchable.. She had so many questions, but never got the chance to ask them;" Who are you? What is your purpose? "
She just wanted to look him in the eyes, and see if he was the madman, evil incarnated the rumors said he was..

She always remembered a note he left behind that said;" A man doesnt fear another man, he fears a monster.." With a dozen bodies wrapped in silk ready for the burial ground..
She remembered her thoughts the same day;" How can a cold heart man like him, yet still bury his enemies with respect even though he hated them "
An enigma, nothing human like or so she thought.

The intercom buzzed ;" Abby a spaceship approaching T-minus 2 minutes " It was the ships computer.

He was finally here, face to face.. In two minutes she was going to have the answers she waited for so long, but she was terrified. The stories, became some sort of legends, but she knew most of them was nothing more then lies created to create an illusion of something that was not real.

She felt herself panicking, and starting counting down.. 120..119...118....117.......

posted on Nov, 5 2016 @ 12:00 AM
More, please. I love this story-you are building the mood up to a high pitch tense.

posted on Nov, 5 2016 @ 12:19 AM
Yes, more.

posted on Nov, 5 2016 @ 08:25 AM
Well, you've definitely caught my attention..

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