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It Will Come for You All...

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posted on Oct, 26 2016 @ 03:07 PM
(For A little Halloween atmosphere, I present this...)

Someone's tale of woe has induced,
a poetic response for You to see.

End of Life will come for You all,
but it will Never come for Me.

For I will live on Eternally with,
the Life Forces I will get from You.

It Will happen to You all one day or night,
there is Nothing to avoid it You can do.

I will be Empowered evermore,
even from Your Last Breath.

I Will Live Forever More,
for I am Known as Death...

I credit Lucia2389 for inspiring this.
It was written as a response to Their Poem.
I re-worded the first stanza to put here...
Lucia's Poem Here...
edit on 26-10-2016 by SyxPak because: (no reason given)

posted on Oct, 26 2016 @ 03:29 PM
a reply to: SyxPak

hey..this is a so so good one..but for me as you know i am so scared of death...but i know we all have to leave our loved ones some day...but so hate the though of it...all the family and friends i love so much will be in alot of pain..just cause i am gone..and will never b able to hug them or kiss them any longer...or even have out talks..but i hope i will go in my sleep and not from that bad word so many people hate and it starts with a "C" you hun

posted on Oct, 26 2016 @ 03:32 PM
a reply to: ccbears

Thanx for replying on this CC. Glad Ya liked it!!

Love Ya too!

posted on Oct, 26 2016 @ 03:41 PM
a reply to: SyxPak

Mr. Dragon.

I enjoyed this.

posted on Oct, 26 2016 @ 05:02 PM
Good job mighty winged one!

posted on Oct, 26 2016 @ 08:59 PM
Dragons of a feather stick together

nice work

posted on Oct, 26 2016 @ 09:31 PM
a reply to: SyxPak

I was in a hurry when I posted this earlier and made mistakes. Bad ones I'm afraid..

Lucia I am VERY sorry I called Your wonderful Story a Poem. I meant no ills by that. Was just a Dragons Brain Fart...

posted on Oct, 26 2016 @ 09:34 PM
a reply to: Jdennis10
a reply to: Night Star
a reply to: Encryptor

I hope You don't mind the multiple reply post...

I wanted to Thank You ALL for taking the time to Read and comment on This.

I appreciate that very much!!!!!!

Thank You!!

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