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Going Away for a While...

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posted on Jun, 19 2016 @ 02:32 PM

Laying alone my body became numb,
Who is touching me so hard.

Why can't I breath anymore,
Electric shocks are entering my body.

Someone is pumping my lungs with air,
Leave me alone I am happy here.

The death Doctor signs my life away,
As my soul drifts over you I can see the love you had.

Looking back over my body makes me smile,
As I rise higher the world looks beautiful.

All the people I love are here to see me,
I see you too but you can't see me.

I wish I could kiss her one last time,
As they stick my body in the ground, tears like rain fall.

No one can hear me down below,
This new world is beautiful.

As time drifts I watch over my family,
They really are sad.

As I grip the thoughts of love a strong wind blows my soul into another body.
Now I live again...😇
edit on 6 19 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)

posted on Jun, 19 2016 @ 02:46 PM
Interesting take on that Q! I liked it!

posted on Jun, 19 2016 @ 02:49 PM
a reply to: SyxPak

Thank you, I just wanted to die, life after death was amazing and then they put me in another body! Lol
edit on 6 19 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)

posted on Jun, 20 2016 @ 03:36 AM
a reply to: Quantum12

I like the subject of life and death. So much so, I nearly replied in rhyme.

It was a nice change from your usual themes of sun, sea love, and colour.

Star, flag and bump.

Very nice.

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