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The egg of love...

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posted on Jun, 9 2016 @ 11:27 PM

As you hatched I stayed awake,
You were my dream every day.

The first time I saw you your were chasing me,
Life has changed so I stayed awake.

The egg of life cracked and you were here,
If it was my choice you would be near,

Mommy and daddy cried joy seeing you the first time,
Our minds were never the same.

The love I feel for you has twisted my mind,
Sadness is just part of time.

I promise you someday you will be mine!
I ❤️ U
edit on 6 9 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)

posted on Jun, 10 2016 @ 12:22 AM
a reply to: Quantum12
What a sweet ode for your precious chick!

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posted on Jun, 10 2016 @ 08:18 AM
a reply to: KateOrnelas

Thank you, you should write on too!

posted on Jun, 10 2016 @ 08:19 AM
a reply to: Mousygretchen

Thank you kindly Mousy!

posted on Jun, 29 2016 @ 12:39 AM
Amazing thought as I never ever thought so deeply! I found this poem near to my heart and the concept behind explainer video companies it is really enormous one!

posted on Jun, 29 2016 @ 05:14 AM
a reply to: Quantum12

Hey Quantum, that was a nice little omelette. I must have missed it the first time around.

S+F....and a little bump.


posted on Jun, 29 2016 @ 07:42 AM
a reply to: midicon

Thank you so much!!!

posted on Sep, 22 2016 @ 03:11 AM


posted on Feb, 26 2017 @ 09:52 PM
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