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Vision of love...

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Quantum12

posted on May, 21 2016 @ 08:26 PM
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The eyes of love look right past me.
The loving eyes see past me,

The loving eyes convinced me to see you,
My loving eyes analyze everything,
All your movements, words, and sounds!

Your eyes try to detect love,
Sorry it is not there.

But love does exist in my eyes,
Your eyes see what they want to see only.

My loving eyes conjure fear, loneliness, and tears.
Give my loving eyes a reason, any reason to love you again.

Don't turn a blind eye.👀👁👀
edit on Mon May 23 2016 by DontTreadOnMe because: removed emojis in title


TNMockingbird

posted on May, 21 2016 @ 08:28 PM
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But love does exist in my eyes,
Your eyes see what they want to see only.


Some truth there Q!

Good job!




Quantum12

posted on May, 21 2016 @ 08:30 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird
Thank you kind friend!

Your eyes see love and his might see beer!


TNMockingbird

posted on May, 21 2016 @ 08:35 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

LOL!!!

No doubt...

That's why I don't seek love...EVER!!!!!



Quantum12

posted on May, 21 2016 @ 08:37 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

I know exactly what you mean!


OneGoal

posted on May, 21 2016 @ 09:17 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12


Nice poem as always Quantum.

I see a beer in front of me now lol. It seems (seems) to help with the burden of knowledge that weighs on me.

I guess entropy has its place.
edit on 21-5-2016 by OneGoal because: (no reason given)


Quantum12

posted on May, 21 2016 @ 09:19 PM
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a reply to: OneGoal

Thank you, OneGoal! Have a fun evening!


OneGoal

posted on May, 21 2016 @ 09:21 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

As long as the world keeps spinning.


You as well.


Brotherman

posted on May, 22 2016 @ 12:03 AM
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Love is supposed to be a powerful emotion and experience. I am not sure I understand its power, is there a such thing as love in hindsight or a book like love for dummies or something?


Quantum12

posted on May, 22 2016 @ 12:17 AM
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a reply to: Brotherman
Well now, you need to write a poem with your brain it would be great!


Brotherman

posted on May, 22 2016 @ 10:48 AM
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originally posted by: Quantum12
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Well now, you need to write a poem with your brain it would be great!


I wouldn't want to scare the ladies away =D




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