posted on Feb, 16 2016 @ 10:44 PM
Well enunciated and pronounced. Speed depends on where you are in the USA or world for clarity.
Your diction is fine. I hear a slight impediment with the CH and SH sound (something that has been described to me as a lateral lisp), but less so
than some radio hosts I know.
I would prefer a bit more inflection, and variance in the delivery. A bit more passion, as an acting professor would have told me.
Your voice is not monotonous, but it does lacks interest.
When you make a mistake you correct yourself without making other sounds. That is something not even professional actors do in habit.
If you have the time take an acting class, or speech class. If you don't have the time you are doing well without them.