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You Captivate Me (poem)

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posted on Nov, 2 2015 @ 06:13 AM

You Captivate Me

Softly, I press my lips to yours,
Nervous, I'm still a little unsure,
If this is the place I'm supposed to be,
But you're all I see, you captivate me.

I take a sip from your cup of love,
A unique and unusual type of drug,
I drink it up and it sets me free,
You're all I see, you intoxicate me.

Had I known how potent you were,
I would've thought twice before,
I drank from the glass you offered me,
Now you're all I see, you're hypnotizing.

I know there is no quitting you,
I'm addicted, nothing I can do,
I fear I'm no longer in control,
I am yours, forever more...

Stay Beautiful,

edit on 2-11-2015 by blend57 because: Change is I changed a few things

edit on 2-11-2015 by blend57 because: (no reason given)

edit on 2-11-2015 by blend57 because: You make me cry, the things you do, Tears flow like rivers from my eyes. Can't understand, the path you choose, It hurts inside, you make me cry. You make me weep, the things you say, Your words, they are so cruel and deep, They cut through me, like an icy blade, The words you speak, you make me weep.

posted on Nov, 2 2015 @ 06:28 AM
a reply to: blend57

That sent shivers down my spine blend57....

Great work!

posted on Nov, 2 2015 @ 06:45 AM
a reply to: blend57

Wow !

That was beautiful ...

ATS Poet Laureate anyone ?
Give this Lady an FSME tag at least.

Keep it up Blend - I like your work !

edit on 2-11-2015 by Timely because: silly errors

posted on Nov, 2 2015 @ 09:56 AM
Very nice!

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