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The Enemy

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CagliostroTheGreat

posted on Dec, 15 2014 @ 10:03 PM
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A sun and star banner
A message of peace
A vast distance traveled
A decade at least
Obstruction of justice
Of time and space
A starstruck alliance
A hateful embrace
A high powered weapon
A race's disgrace
A planet in ashes
Life laid to waste
The harsh bitter taste
A lesson was learned then
A new pact was wrought
A group of survivors
The last of their kind
With tenacious deceit
They infiltrated the fleet
A battle ensued
A great many died
A line was established
A connection through time
We are forewarned now
We will be prepared
the enemy's coming
And no one is scared
This is our story
The tale of our land
The humans are coming
Let's make our last stand


edit on Cpm10Monday1420141531Mon, 15 Dec 2014 22:14:15 -06002014 by CagliostroTheGreat because: general editing


deloprator20000

posted on Dec, 15 2014 @ 10:11 PM
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I read now, good story, time for dreams.


CagliostroTheGreat

posted on Dec, 15 2014 @ 10:14 PM
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a reply to: deloprator20000

Thanks!



IndependentAgent

posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 03:55 AM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

Nice!!


CagliostroTheGreat

posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 08:53 AM
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a reply to: IndependentAgent

Thanks for reading!



SyxPak

posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 12:30 PM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat


S+F!! Very Cool!!!
Syx.


CagliostroTheGreat

posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 12:51 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Thanks Syx!


SyxPak

posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 11:07 PM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

You are Very Totally Welcome Caglio!!!!!!


Quantum12

posted on Apr, 4 2016 @ 08:58 AM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

I think I took your words and put words of yours in my story.

You inspired me. Last night.


CagliostroTheGreat

posted on Apr, 4 2016 @ 09:01 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Excellent! I'm glad my writing is inspiring to someone. Its just good to have folks reading.





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