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originally posted by: AboveBoard
Great entry, Night!

Chilling and creepy. I will be imagining those poor poor people...

Peace,
AB

I know! I usually like happy endings. I don't know what happened to me in writing this one. LOL Thanks, glad you liked it.

a reply to: dollukka

Thanks! Your campfire stories must have been great to listen to!

originally posted by: Jennyfrenzy
a reply to: Night Star

Fun read that left me craving for more!

Well thank you! Much appreciated!!

originally posted by: liteonit6969
a reply to: Night Star

Loved the perspective coming from someone getting info 2nd hand. A clever way to focus on the important details. Your descriptive style and language made me feel as though i was there with them....maybe one of those in the white jackets

Hahahaha! Thanks!

originally posted by: AccessDenied
Gahhh! CLIFFHANGER!

LOL, I don't think we want to know what happens to them after they get caught. Then again, they could be heros and save the day. Ya just never know.

a reply to: Night Star

In my version they are forced to watch Nicholas Cage movies.

Quick succinct read, super awesome well done!

I liked it

interesting take on the supposed experimentation on people by the government

They have a history of doing



On the writers note
If you need to when you do multiple edits
you can delete the last edit tag on the story

Keep in mind you can also put a reason in there that fits with the story if you want
humorus, dark ect..

With the double post which was unintentional

A last note

dont be afraid to extend the story later on

It has already beaten Twilght series

I sometimes wonder if such insanity could exist to explain our missing.
S and F

a reply to: Pinke

Thank you so much!!!!!

originally posted by: ripcontrol
I liked it

interesting take on the supposed experimentation on people by the government

They have a history of doing



On the writers note
If you need to when you do multiple edits
you can delete the last edit tag on the story

Keep in mind you can also put a reason in there that fits with the story if you want
humorus, dark ect..

Oh, now why didn't I think of that? LOL DOH! Thanks for the tip!

originally posted by: ripcontrol
With the double post which was unintentional

A last note

dont be afraid to extend the story later on

It has already beaten Twilght series

Oh wow, I don't know, I might end up ruining it.

originally posted by: zazzafrazz
I sometimes wonder if such insanity could exist to explain our missing.
S and F

Thanks for the star and flag!!!!!!! I wouldn't at all be surprised if that's where some of our missing folks go.

God, I love that avatar!!!

a reply to: Night Star

That was a very good story... all the better because of its plausibility! You just never know what happens when people go missing... or why!

S&F

a reply to: OpinionatedB

Oh, thank you so much!!

Starred for the best part of the story : the dialogue

a reply to: gorsestar

Thanks!

Nooooooo! Not the men in white jackets! heh A fun read, look forward to more from you for sure.

a reply to: AutOmatIc

Oh, so glad you enjoyed it!

Oooo creepy. Liked it though. Have you got any plans to extend it?

Buddha has a good suggestion and if everyone thinks the brother killed himself well, all the more eerie.

originally posted by: buddha
"I think its about time you visited your brother.