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Of Planetary Origin [PAN2014]

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posted on Sep, 9 2014 @ 08:07 PM
In a Large Control Room aboard His Craft, the Tall Turquoise colored Humanoid used a type of keyboard to access the program used for opening and closing wormholes in His vicinity of space.

Racing his long slender fingers across the keys, Tomar, the leader of, and one of the Rennak, as they were called by other races, entered the necessary sequence of numbers and symbols needed to perform the required tasks.
Large sectors of Space and parts of huge Galaxies have been destroyed by others who have miscalculated these same maneuvers. One little error can lead to devastating results!!
He found the proper sequence of commands and opened a wormhole that led to another dimension where he could take the package for analysis by a team of very intelligent scientists.

Tomar thought of using another ship and an auto-pilot type of programming to send the small package he had on board his craft, off to another dimension of Space/Time to a team of waiting specialists. He thought it best however to make sure the package was received by the scientists from him personally. This way there would be no doubt that it made it to the intended destination.

The thought of a robotic ship taking the package of Highly Concentrated viral material that could have problems on it's voyage, and possibly crash on another planet was the main reason he wanted to make the trip and safeguard the package personally. If it was opened into the atmosphere of another planet, the highly concentrated mix would be strong enough to contaminate a planet three times the size of his home world. It was almost the same size as Earth.

He was not really bothered by the fact that he knew He may not return to His home world. There weren't many left there anyway, after the contagion was released into the atmosphere of his world. He thought it was strange that He had caught the virus, but it did not have the full effect on him that it had on all the others. He merely had very mild body shakes and only a few spasms of his arms every now and then. Strange indeed.

The package he carried was intercepted before it could be used against his home world to be taken to the scientists in hopes that they could develop an antidote for the fast spreading disease. The contagion was created on the planet where Tomar was headed. Tomar thought it best, and faster to have the creators of the Virus make the antidote.

The Rennakians had waged War against the Oman because of a previous violation of Rights of some of the Rennak Women, by the Oman's. Half the planet of the Oman's had been destroyed as a result of the Planet wide attack of The Rennak WarShips. As a revenge tactic, the Omar's released the nasty Synthetic Virus into the planets atmosphere, of the Rennak, with devastating results!!

The virus had spread quickly through the air and had affected every Rennak it fell upon. Once breathed into their lungs, it took hold rapidly, and had a devastating effect on the respiratory and nervous systems of the victims. Once infected, the lungs would bleed, and the victims would shake violently and whip their heads around in a frenzied motion that would have spittle and blood flying out of their mouths for several feet in all directions. Their arms would flail in front of them and over their heads in what would ordinarily have been a comical fashion, but considering the circumstances while under the influence of the virus, was not funny at all! Then after several hours of this maniacal activity, the victims would collapse dead, from blood loss and exhaustion!!

Those who didn't breath in the toxic virus, caught the disease from the water supplies that the dust had fallen into. The fact that the entire planet had not been wiped out, was in it's own rights, amazing!!

Onward towards his journey's end, Tomar was getting a little nervous. Nervous because of the planet of destination had some rather Aggressive Planetary Defenses. Satellites orbited the perimeter of the World that would seek and destroy anything they found offensive! The Satellites could be shut down by manual command, only if the commands were given in time by the proper authorities.

In the near distance he could see the flashing lights of the satellites as they flew around the planet. He called on his comm for the Guardians in charge of the defense system. There was no response! He felt his ship lurch, as it was being pulled into a closer path of the planet! It felt like a tractor beam of sorts.

"This is new!" He thought to himself! "Answer me!!" He yelled into the comm's microphone.

"We heard you the first time, but it would do no good to respond. The defense system is on auto and we Cannot turn it off!!!" One of the Planet's Guardians said.

Now in the edge of the atmosphere, Tomars ship was shaking violently. He could not slow it down, or turn it away from the Planet! He was being pulled deeper and deeper into the planet's skies.

There was a LOUD Explosion as a rocket hit the side of Tomar's Craft! He and the ship were blown to bits! The package that had been safely shipped to this destination, was destroyed!
Dust from the package flew into the atmosphere of this blue world. Planet Earth would Never be the same again......

edit on 9-9-2014 by SyxPak because: (no reason given)

posted on Sep, 10 2014 @ 02:29 AM
Enjoyed this!

posted on Sep, 10 2014 @ 11:30 AM
Nice one Syx!
Well done sir.


posted on Sep, 10 2014 @ 11:57 AM
Good job

posted on Sep, 10 2014 @ 05:10 PM
Thanx for the Comp's You guys! I appreciate it!

posted on Sep, 11 2014 @ 04:02 AM
a reply to: SyxPak

There's always one - thanks a bunch, Tomar!
Great story, very exciting and easy to read. I liked this a lot.

posted on Sep, 11 2014 @ 04:15 AM
a reply to: beansidhe

Thank You Beansidhe. I'm Glad you liked this story!

posted on Oct, 1 2014 @ 03:14 PM
a reply to: SyxPak


posted on Oct, 1 2014 @ 03:30 PM
a reply to: ccbears

Why Thank You My Dear CC! I appreciate it!

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