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Sonnet #1 On Pantheism

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posted on Feb, 16 2014 @ 06:16 PM
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On waking winters slumber hunger has
Her grip again. Such longer days do bring
A certain basal greed, desires such as
Nurishment. Body, mind and soul want spring

To wash away the winters webs. Ignite
The Sun and fan his flames and bask in him
'Til ev'en comes and brings the moons fair light.
Her glow is his, reflected back undimmed.

The River ebbs her Ice away and sways
Her hips around the Oak. His boughs
Do drip unto her dew of morning. May
Arrives thus flowers budding; opened now.

Cock'rel crows Hens name in fevoured frenzy!
Flower holds the seed. The stamen empty!
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posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 07:11 AM
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reply to post by Tsu322
 


That's gorgeous! Well crafted, engaging... Bloody well done!

starred and flagged and so on and so forth!



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 07:29 AM
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Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

I love Sonnets, last month I hated them! A girl has to move on from lymerics at some point though.



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 07:40 AM
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There once was a lady named Tsu
Who wrote about flowers and dew
She penned out a sonnet
And now I am on it
But a limerick's the best I can do.


That was beautiful! S&F
jacy



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 08:13 AM
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There was a young lady called Jacy,
Who's critique of me's far, far from Gakky.
She's an hounoury Brit,
So bring all your kit,
Like your wellies and brolly and mac-y.

P.S. Gakky is Welsh for yuck.

P.S. You have a very difficult name to rhyme before coffee!



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 08:20 AM
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hahahaha....too funny!

(I'll make it easier for you...my name is really Jane too, lol.)

Now....if anyone DARES to make a 'plain Jane' comment....they are getting a rather large welly up the arse!


jacy



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 09:22 AM
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There is a young lady called Jane,
Who's Canadian, not from Bahrain.
She drinks coffee, not tea,
And she's really gutsy.
And she's rather peed off with the rain!


Nice to meet you Jane, I'm Sadie btw.

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posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 09:29 AM
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Aww, I love that!

The Beatles have already written a tribute to you!
Shine on, Sexy Sadie!
jacy





posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 10:37 AM
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So! Its the name game is it?

Well, in the interest of turnabout being fair play, mine is Peter. Do with that information, whatever suits your fancy



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 10:53 AM
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ROFL!!!

I knew the song existed but never listened to the lyrics! No wonder my parents never played it. Haha.

My poor neighbours must think, I keep laughing with the windows open and setting off the dogs barking.



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 10:55 AM
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TrueBrit
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So! Its the name game is it?

Well, in the interest of turnabout being fair play, mine is Peter. Do with that information, whatever suits your fancy


roflmao

Peter? Lovely name!
*biting tongue*
Ohhhh....the limericks that I could write. (No! just...no)

jacy



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 11:01 AM
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Bring it!

What could possibly go wrong?



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 11:06 AM
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What could go wrong?
a) Mods ban me for life.
b) Jane kicks me out of shed.
c) All my thought-provoking posts will be forgotten, and I shall forever be remembered as the girl who got kicked out for playing with Peter.
d) The above-mentioned legacy scars my children for life.

Although, I must say...I'm glad your name's not Dick.

jacy



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 11:08 AM
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There was a young fella called Pete,
Who's extremely allergic to heat.
So he took off his clothes,
And with body exposed,
Thought to chase some old gal down the street.




Jaky,

"Although, I must say...I'm glad your name's not Dick."

Stop it already, if your going to make me pee myself do it at the end of the day, not just after I got dressed! I'm sending you the bill for laundry powder!
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posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 11:18 AM
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jacygirl
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What could go wrong?
a) Mods ban me for life.
b) Jane kicks me out of shed.
c) All my thought-provoking posts will be forgotten, and I shall forever be remembered as the girl who got kicked out for playing with Peter.
d) The above-mentioned legacy scars my children for life.

All that from a limerick or two? You could construct an RMD from the recesses of your mind (that is, a Rhyme of Mass Distraction)? Good lord!



Although, I must say...I'm glad your name's not Dick.

jacy


Trust me... so am I !!!



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 11:22 AM
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I had to call in air support from the ROFLcopter for that one!

I did terrify my neighbor with my exposed chest, during the hilarious events in the Valentines thread on Valentines Day, in the evening. My garbage bin got taken by the wind, and thrown down the stairs that lead up to the flats. I think my neighbor near enough had a bowel movement when she saw me walking back up the steps, bin in hand, wind in my hair, rain dripping off my chest hair lol!



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 11:33 AM
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Ah, the good ole bin excuse, well played


Anyway, in the spirit of the ATS community pics or it never happened. (CCTV will do fine)



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 11:46 AM
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*sigh*
I've erased everything I've written in response. Apparently the recesses of my mind, are much too filthy for this site.

I will be sitting in the corner for a 'time out'.
I would apologize, but I'm still laughing.

jacy



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 11:56 AM
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The only place I know of that has CCTV of me with my shirt off, is the pub I used to live in, and that was about ten years ago. I sincerely doubt that they kept it, unless the managers wife had an unvoiced enjoyment of hairy chaps.



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 12:05 PM
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hehe, it's not easy posting when you know every time you hit enter could be your last. It's hard being appropriate.

Meat, beat, eat, backseat, bedsheets...

There was a young man that eats meat,
That he tenderised and he beat...

Pesky veggies spoiling all the fun...






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