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Valentine For My Muse [Feb2014]

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posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 06:48 PM
At first glance you may only see
a beautiful and lithe young woman,
but there is so much more than
what meets the eye
she moves with a catlike grace,
her movement is like a gentle breeze,
she exists as a dancer
for the world to embrace
upon sharing her words
she speaks an old language
of sensitivity and creativity,
born of experience and understanding
she is courageous and not afraid to cry,
she embraces emotions as her first language,
she breathes and exhales with the heartbeat
of those she is with and
this ancient soul within
must find expression
through her dance and words
she gives to those around her
for when life loves hope
there is hope for life.
edit on 2/13/2014 by tothetenthpower because: (no reason given)

posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 07:29 PM
reply to post by grayeagle

Beautiful.. Simply beautiful.
I want to write one but my mind keeps refusing.. Maybe I will write one..who knows

Good job and good luck my friend


posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 08:52 PM
reply to post by grayeagle

Lovely! Flagged and starred it earlier, then just came back to reply.

Enjoyed the imagery of the dancer. Beautiful!


posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 09:20 PM
reply to post by natalia

I just know you have some wonderful words to share with us Nat.

I look forward to reading your words because I know they come right from your heart!
Happy Valentines to you my friend.

posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 09:23 PM
reply to post by AboveBoard

Thank you my friend. There have been so many valentines in my life but I am finding
it is especially wonderful to wish all my ATS friends a wonderful valentines day!
Peace to you my friend.

posted on Feb, 14 2014 @ 04:16 PM
Another nicely written piece. I sure do enjoy reading your work my friend. God luck in the comp

posted on Feb, 27 2014 @ 08:38 PM
reply to post by grayeagle

It's very well written! I'm sure your muse would be or is or perhaps will be very pleased with it. It has a good rhythm to it and reads well, the last two lines especially add great poignance to the piece. Well done, I'm sure any girl would be thrilled to find out it's about her! Thanks for writing and best of luck to you!

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