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My Valentine [Feb 2014]

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posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 08:00 AM
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The day is near. The day of love
I would be with you now, Just if I could
I feel in my heart, One day you'll be mine
And be my special valentine

I will cook you dinner, And serve delights
Your long dress shimmers, In the moonlight
The prettiest girl i ever did see
Would be so happy, If you were with me

Dessert would taste fine, With just one spoon
You look so devine, Under the moon
My kisses rain down, On your tender lips
Our bodies close, My hands on your hips

Our clothes hit the floor, Just like autumn leaves
Under the covers, Our bodies do weave
The passion, The love, The visions of you
I close my eyes, It just seems so true

Then I would caress you, Never leave your sight
Fall asleep in my arms, I will hold you so tight
We would live every night, Like it's our last
True love finds a way, Don't let this night pass

But for now just a dream, That I have of you
As february goes, A new month is due
I still want more than ever, For you to be mine
You will always be my special Valentine xx




edit on 2 13 2014 by TheDoctor46 because: (no reason given)




posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 08:26 AM
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Really? I thought that this guy would have been your valentine.





posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 08:29 AM
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reply to post by daaskapital
 


Lol . That image has just ruined my lovely thoughts!!



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 08:31 AM
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TheDoctor46
reply to post by daaskapital
 


Lol . That image has just ruined my lovely thoughts!!




Sorry about that. I know it was worth it though, lol.


Good poem by the way.



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 08:32 AM
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reply to post by TheDoctor46
 


And mine!
S&F, you heartbreaker!



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 08:35 AM
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reply to post by beansidhe
 


Thanks for that beansidhe . Much appreciated



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 08:59 AM
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reply to post by TheDoctor46
 


You big softie you... and I thought you didn't care for me...

You have me all blushing now...

Edited to add... Oh bugger, I missed the part about the shimmering dress... (wasn't intended for me then)

*sniff sniff...* nobody loves me...

huggie wuggie lovey repects

Rodinus


edit on 13/2/14 by Rodinus because: Sniff added



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 09:01 AM
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reply to post by Rodinus
 


Our secrets out now rod sorry mate....You do look good in that dress though haha...Hey...where's my star and flag Arthur?...Arthurjob!!



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 09:03 AM
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TheDoctor46
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Our secrets out now rod sorry mate....You do look good in that dress though haha...Hey...where's my star and flag Arthur?...Arthurjob!!


Awww nuts, I edited to late and you got there before me...

Arthurjob...


Kindest respects

Rodinus



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 09:28 AM
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reply to post by TheDoctor46
 


Wow Doc. I want a Chick Version of your Model. Pronto!
Actually make that Three!



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 11:27 AM
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reply to post by TheDoctor46
 


Oh my sweet hearted friend. That was beautiful...
You sure do know how to melt a gals heart.. xx
Really beautiful images... So very beautiful and lovely...
Good luck my friend

And thanks for sharing your valentine.
-nat



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 03:59 PM
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That was a wonderful read Doc. Truly well written and packed full of feeling.
S&F my friend.

Good luck with the contest. There are so many great poets on here, I'm sitting this one out...I suck at poetry. Who could compete with that? lol

Thanks,
Blend57



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 07:07 PM
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reply to post by TheDoctor46
 

Good job Doc! Someday, hopefully we will find special person that will feel the same way toward us. I don't know about you but I sure miss the snuggle. Touch is such a powerful dimension in our lives. I don't know about England but there are now professional snugglers here in the U.S. that you can hire by the hour and I am not talking about sex. In fact it is totally forbidden. Our society is so busy and tired that we forget how important it is to connected physically with another person. Hope you are doing well. Peace my friend.

snf



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 07:42 PM
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blend57
That was a wonderful read Doc. Truly well written and packed full of feeling.
S&F my friend.

Good luck with the contest. There are so many great poets on here, I'm sitting this one out...I suck at poetry. Who could compete with that? lol

Thanks,
Blend57

You could sweet friend. You've got the talent all through your fingers.. I know you can do it.

What's funny..or strange..is I've lost words to write a poem for this contest!! Ahhhh!!

Oh well.. Maybe words will eventually come.
Hope you are doing well



posted on Feb, 14 2014 @ 08:42 AM
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Thanks for the comments kind people. I only have access to mobile phone internet until next week due to moving out!.... So I will reply properly and read other entries next week



posted on Feb, 16 2014 @ 10:10 PM
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reply to post by TheDoctor46
 


Great to see your writing here, Doc!
S&F

Thanks for the lovely poem to read!!

- AB



posted on Feb, 17 2014 @ 03:49 PM
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reply to post by TheDoctor46
 


I love poetry like this. That is just heartwarming and beautiful
x



posted on Feb, 21 2014 @ 04:50 PM
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reply to post by mickygrimshaw
 


Thanks for the kind words.....Wiganner



posted on Feb, 21 2014 @ 04:52 PM
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reply to post by AboveBoard
 


Yes I thought it was about time I put some out. I will have a long way to go to get to your high standards
...



posted on Feb, 21 2014 @ 04:52 PM
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reply to post by natalia
 


Well thank you!..And your words did come flowing out



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