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As You Turned Around and Walked Away [Feb2014]

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posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 04:38 PM
As you turned around and walked away,
A thousand words I wished to say.
But I kept quiet and watched you go,
Now all I have are these tears to show.

As you slowly faded from my view,
My heart cried out tears for you.
For all in vain cause you did not hear,
You left me, never to reappear.

The more I cried, the more it hurt,
Wishing you'd return and offer me comfort.
As day turned to night, you never did return,
Yet the fire in my heart continues to burn.

In time, I know I'll be fine,
I'm just glad you were once mine.
I treasure every moment spent with you,
Life was perfect with just me and you.

I still remember your laughter, remember your smile,
You made me complete; my life worthwhile.
I wish you the best in everything you do,
One day you will realize what I saw in you.

It's all in the past, it wasn't meant to be,
What we had was special, too bad you couldn't see.
Although we will never be together,
The moments we shared will last forever.

(post by HUMBLEONE removed for a serious terms and conditions violation)

posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 06:53 PM
reply to post by Pistoche

You are a very intelligent writer.
I hope you can find this feeling again.
Life works in strange ways.

posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 10:13 PM
reply to post by Pistoche

That was really, really good !!

A beautiful, sad but beautiful read.

posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 11:17 PM
Beautiful and sad. Made me cry.

posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 03:40 PM
Thank you all for your kind words. Feedback and words of encouragement are always appreciated. I find it kind of scary displaying my work out in the open for the world to see and criticize, but your comments have eased my tension.

posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 04:22 PM
Wow, that was beautiful. I didn't know there were so many talented poets on ATS.


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