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posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 11:06 AM
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When you purchase a smart phone to point at the sky
To track Saturn, or look up tide-times.
When your knowledge of texts is a book on a shelf
And a 'ringer's" a dead look-a-like.

When you stare at the floor as the other girls talk;
Try denying the looks they all share!
So you sneak out the back and you lie through your crack;
'I don't care', I don't care!, I don't care!'

When you log on the net but your post is unseen
'Cause they've noticed you've little to say.
So you check out the news and you offer your views
But the thread died a death yesterday.

Yet it isn't all bad, I can share, I can share
If I take it one line at a time.
If I practice real hard, make them rhyme (and on time!)
I can shine! I can Shine! I can shine!








posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 11:11 AM
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Very nice my friend


You will shine, you have the beauty inside and out
I just feel this from the bottom of my heart
I'm not rhyming today cause I find it fun
Some girls looks can be quite odd
Just look the other way and lift your chin high
I always say one day at a time
I sure like what you said bout one line
Whoops there's a rhyme I didn't mean
You will shine through all eternity


I hope you have a lovely day

Peace and love
-nat



posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 11:31 AM
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I must have a doggy ear, as it's that silent whistle I hear.

Ok I'm too tired I can't do it right now....
I'll rhyme when I wake up later.

Good work OP I enjoyed it.



posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 11:58 AM
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That was superb! And with proper scansion!

Shine on





posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 01:08 PM
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reply to post by natalia
 


Thank you, that was so lovely, I'm not regretting posting it at all now!

I hope you have a very nice day too!




posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 01:17 PM
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Thank you lol. I look forward to your fresh-faced reply!




posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 01:25 PM
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Thank you!

This is very embarrassing to admit but I had to Google sancsion lol. I now have a new way of saying bouncy-thought-syndrome!

I spent my school days unwisely to say the least!




posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 01:41 PM
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Bouncy thought syndrome! It's a much better name!
I spent my youth, well let's say it was 'hazy', but I can still remember a few things from my higher Latin (I wasn't allowed to do maths or sciences due to being too thick!).

Loved your poem



posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 02:10 PM
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I know what you mean lol, who needs school anyway. I found real Harvard poetry lectures on Youtube, shame is it goes in one ear and out the other.




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