You do nothing for me.

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posted on Dec, 17 2013 @ 09:09 AM
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You do nothing for me.
Its taken so long, just to see.
All those lies I believe.
Created by me, for me.
A seemingly endless loop,
of fishing lines and hooks.
But now I know,
you do nothing for me.
It feels so free.
There is so much space
just to be !
The end of you and me,
a celebration like no other.
Goodbye mother, goodbye father.
A life with no other,like no other.
No more mystery,
No more searching,
Neither full or empty.
Something much better.
Swimming in the land of plenty.
All because,
you do nothing for me.

Eliberocelta Antequera Dic13




posted on Dec, 17 2013 @ 09:15 AM
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a poem of the ego it seems, or at least that's how i perceive it, thanks Op



posted on Dec, 17 2013 @ 09:23 AM
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One who has attained dwelling within the Communion of the Presence. All the things of this world fade away. There is no return, there is no off switch. Having pushed away all the ladders of religions and philosophies and now standing in awe, never to return.



posted on Dec, 17 2013 @ 09:31 AM
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OceanSpray
a poem of the ego it seems, or at least that's how i perceive it, thanks Op


If feels like ego to you because you see the "you do nothing for me" verse as something negative. The poetic is using it in a positive sense, check this verse out:



you do nothing for me.
It feels so free.
There is so much space
just to be !


When you realize that no one is doing anything "for" you, you are free because you realize all of "this" is just happening.



posted on Dec, 17 2013 @ 09:43 AM
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OceanSpray
a poem of the ego it seems, or at least that's how i perceive it, thanks Op


If feels like ego to you because you see the "you do nothing for me" verse as something negative. The poetic is using it in a positive sense, check this verse out:



you do nothing for me.
It feels so free.
There is so much space
just to be !


When you realize that no one is doing anything "for" you, you are free because you realize all of "this" is just happening.


excellent post although different only by perspective, such as your title, "from darkness there is light"
in my perspective it's backwards because darkness has no power, it is merely the lack of light so in effect light cannot come from darkness, or can it?



posted on Dec, 17 2013 @ 10:02 AM
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Nice poem. What is "Eliberocelta Antequera Dic13"

I've stuck a ladder in the snowbank and climbed up it more than once.



posted on Dec, 17 2013 @ 10:45 AM
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Ha ha me too dont worry about that! (snakes and ladders) eliberocelta means the Celtic Iberian in Spanish. Antequera is the name of an ancient town in Spain where this poem was born, 13 for this year. Thanks to all!




posted on Dec, 18 2013 @ 05:15 AM
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Sounds like a coming of age Ancient Thunder !

Should we now refer to you as "Old Fart" ?






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