A short poem

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posted on Dec, 5 2013 @ 03:09 PM
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The Logical Extreme of Fabric Clans

Struggle is power failure
Structure crumbles to dust
The only thought to survive-
Some abstract notion of
feeling cloth with the mind,
By extension,
The hands and feet.




posted on Dec, 5 2013 @ 03:21 PM
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Gosh I wish I was deep enough to understand this lol



posted on Dec, 5 2013 @ 04:15 PM
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Very nice poem, I enjoyed it a lot.

Short and sweet, very primitive feeling work.

I get the feeling if I come back to read it again I derive a different meaning, cool.


Cheers!



posted on Dec, 6 2013 @ 01:01 PM
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Very interesting thoughts,I suppose it is about survival in your poem,or an inner battle that each human being have at one moment in time,ie emotional feeling.



posted on Dec, 7 2013 @ 04:20 PM
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Thank you very much for the comments!





 
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