A song I just made about my failed relationship.

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posted on Nov, 13 2013 @ 11:23 PM
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Let me know what yall think.




posted on Nov, 13 2013 @ 11:50 PM
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Tight rhyme and lyrics.



edit on 13-11-2013 by The GUT because: (no reason given)



posted on Nov, 13 2013 @ 11:53 PM
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Thank you!



posted on Nov, 13 2013 @ 11:55 PM
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Fantastic! Dang!

I like that you aren't vulgar and degrading..............very talented.



posted on Nov, 14 2013 @ 12:44 AM
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Good job!! I can relate to a lot of the lyrics.



posted on Nov, 14 2013 @ 01:00 AM
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Night Star
Good job!! I can relate to a lot of the lyrics.


That was point! ;p lol



posted on Nov, 14 2013 @ 01:01 AM
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Egyptia
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Fantastic! Dang!

I like that you aren't vulgar and degrading..............very talented.


Oh I used to be. I still cuss, but only to convey feeling.



posted on Nov, 14 2013 @ 01:02 AM
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supermanning

Night Star
Good job!! I can relate to a lot of the lyrics.


That was point! ;p lol


That was the* point lol



posted on Nov, 14 2013 @ 01:44 AM
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Nice song.





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