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Pure Love! [Nov2013]

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posted on Nov, 22 2013 @ 09:57 PM
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It was fun, first time I have tried a short story. Normally I write 100,000 words for a book. This was great, may make it into a book one day.

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posted on Nov, 24 2013 @ 06:54 PM
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Terrific - just like the other two.

It seems I read your stories in reverse order of their posting. No matter of course, but I'm glad I was able to finish with a Dragon story.

I seem to have an affinity for them...




posted on Nov, 24 2013 @ 10:29 PM
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I am in the middle of another short story on Warriors. May save it for the next contest!

I am glad you liked it!

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posted on Nov, 30 2013 @ 07:26 PM
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Second book came back from my editor, good stuff! Not too many errors, quite a few really helpful suggestions. A good editor is worth their weight in gold.

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posted on Apr, 3 2014 @ 07:56 PM
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Are you perhaps channeling Anne McCaffrey? The greatest author of Dragon stories in my opinion.

What a beautiful, richly written tale. I've read it twice and will read it again.

Please tell me you have a book, or other stories I can read.

Thank you for these moments of slipping into your wonderful imagination.

Des



posted on Apr, 4 2014 @ 10:08 PM
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Are you perhaps channeling Anne McCaffrey? The greatest author of Dragon stories in my opinion.

What a beautiful, richly written tale. I've read it twice and will read it again.

Please tell me you have a book, or other stories I can read.

Thank you for these moments of slipping into your wonderful imagination.

Des


Thank you!

My sig line has links to both more short stories and my first two books. All are in the same 'Universe.'

Try www.abovetopsecret.com... next

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posted on Apr, 6 2014 @ 06:07 PM
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Thank you Pheonix. I love your writing style, and imagery. As you know I am mesmerized by Dragons...


Des



posted on Apr, 6 2014 @ 06:40 PM
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Wow Phoenix I really enjoyed such a beautiful story. I love the way
it was all put together & it flowed so nicely & especially for it
to be a short story. The ending was so perfect meaning it could
just end there or it could continue on into a larger production.
Thank you for a wonderful escape!

Cheers
Ektar



posted on Apr, 6 2014 @ 07:18 PM
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Thank you both. Try www.abovetopsecret.com... next!

All of my short stories here on ATS are set in the same 'universe'

You will find them all in my profile page.

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posted on Apr, 6 2014 @ 07:41 PM
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Woo Hoo..we've hit Pheonix paydirt...



Thanks!

Des



posted on Apr, 6 2014 @ 08:15 PM
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Thanks, I liked this one as well, it was fun to write!

www.abovetopsecret.com...

I liked it so much, I did two versions with different POVs. The other is here

www.abovetopsecret.com...


Short stories allow one to develop a single aspect of your storyline and is a very useful tool.

Of course, it is also a good tool for a little publicity.

Before I joined ATS I had no idea I could write a short story. It is a fun ride.

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posted on Apr, 7 2014 @ 10:04 PM
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Contest idea!

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posted on Apr, 7 2014 @ 10:19 PM
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posted on Nov, 6 2014 @ 06:16 AM
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What a wonderful and imaginative story! I just loved this!!!!!



posted on Nov, 6 2014 @ 06:30 AM
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a reply to: pheonix358

It speaks to me beautiful really lovely. Thanks for sharing, felt like a mind hug.



posted on Nov, 11 2014 @ 12:33 AM
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a reply to: Peeple

I have written this as a book, hope to have it out around Xmas or the new year. Was lots of fun, young teenager taken to another planet, new culture, grows up, gets into a little trouble. Gets out of lots of trouble.

More than that, I deeply explored the Dragon / Rider bond. I hope I nailed it!

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