posted on Oct, 8 2013 @ 11:30 PM
reply to post by Scaleru
I would try this.
Move the townscape further right, have the hill with the tower slope more drastically to the left. I mean move that tower so that maybe you can still
see the trees on it's right. Then move it up a bit to fill the space. Like the tip of the tower is a bit to the right of the lowest lock of hair,
and a teensy bit higher.
Put the flames behind the tower, not too high, but like everything BEHIND it is burning.
That should open up space behind 'KRI' to add more yellow.
Love the font, but there needs to be more separation between 'The Immortal Tales' and 'Kri'. Don't shrink it too much ('Kri'), just enough
there is more than a gnat's hair between.
The tower and the Straight part of the K in 'Kri' should be equal distance from the border. Perhaps the tower doesn't need to be as far to the
edge as the long side of the 'K', but close.
Basically if the lettering is one layer, move the background layer (town) up and to the right, redo the flames a tad lower and behind the tower, then
you can fill behind 'Kri' with that same cool yellow you have behind the figure in the middle.
I would also change the color on the right, I feel like there is too much yellow in that pillar (pillar of yellow) between the figure and the edge.
Gives you an opportunity to add some darker color towards the middle/bottom of that pillar, and have the area behind your name that nice contrasting
yellow so it's more readable.
I am just awful at this. I hope you can see what I'm seeing. I spent WAY too long trying to type this out and staring at the cover.
I really want to help because I think this is a neat project and I want you to kick some ass! Feel free to U2U me though clearly I'm not great at
expressing what I see.
Best of luck.