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Not a LOVE story
They called it true romance
when his eyes met her glance
Smallest touch that became electric
Yet all of the hearts remained skeptic
Bodies moving in a rhythmic motion
like an unbridled nuclear explosion
A night of passion words spoken
But all dreams must be broken
2 were 1, soon now three
This is not, this is not...
a love story.
Bybyots
reply to post by abeverage
abeverage: Poet Laureate of ATS. It's always a treat when you post one of your creations and I look forward to them.
I thought that I would post this song so that we can dance to your poem.
Thanks, man.
AboveBoard
reply to post by abeverage
Divine Intervention is a heck of a reason to edit a post!
I've starred & flagged your apple of a poem. Bitter sweet, this one is. And again, I love the use of shape in a poem to make it mean even more - referring back to the Blood of Eden too... Well done.
peace,
AB