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Not a Love story

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posted on Oct, 3 2013 @ 04:33 PM
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Not a LOVE story
They called it true romance

when his eyes met her glance

Smallest touch that became electric
Yet all of the hearts remained skeptic

Bodies moving in a rhythmic motion
like an unbridled nuclear explosion

A night of passion words spoken
But all dreams must be broken

2 were 1, soon now three
This is not, this is not...
a love story.


edit on 3-10-2013 by abeverage because: of divine intervention...




posted on Oct, 3 2013 @ 04:52 PM
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abeverage: Poet Laureate of ATS. It's always a treat when you post one of your creations and I look forward to them.

I thought that I would post this song so that we can dance to your poem.



Thanks, man.




posted on Oct, 3 2013 @ 05:01 PM
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abeverage: Poet Laureate of ATS. It's always a treat when you post one of your creations and I look forward to them.

I thought that I would post this song so that we can dance to your poem.
Thanks, man.



No, thank you! Not sure I should be christened so, as there may not be any rabbits left in that hat though....

PERFECT Theme Music!

No matter what you have heard or believe Johnny is still Rotten to the core!

LET'S DANCE!
edit on 3-10-2013 by abeverage because: of proper thanks required



posted on Oct, 3 2013 @ 05:12 PM
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Divine Intervention is a heck of a reason to edit a post!


I've starred & flagged your apple of a poem. Bitter sweet, this one is. And again, I love the use of shape in a poem to make it mean even more - referring back to the Blood of Eden too... Well done.

peace,
AB



posted on Oct, 3 2013 @ 05:32 PM
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AboveBoard
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Divine Intervention is a heck of a reason to edit a post!


I've starred & flagged your apple of a poem. Bitter sweet, this one is. And again, I love the use of shape in a poem to make it mean even more - referring back to the Blood of Eden too... Well done.

peace,
AB


Thank you!

There is always a reason to edit a post some are more evident than others, so I follow a famous quote...

Art is a collaboration between God and the artist, and the less the artist does the better.
~Andre Gide


I honestly have no control over the shape it just comes out that way.



posted on Oct, 3 2013 @ 05:37 PM
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But you had the wit to color it, and that is where chance meets artistry, no?
It does refer nicely back to Blood of Eden, though, am I right?

It's still cool, however it happens...



posted on Oct, 3 2013 @ 06:24 PM
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Very nice friend *snapping fingers*

Your creativeness is showing


My mind seems to be in the clouds a lot...I just haven't been writing like I used to.
Oh well..it will come again I know.

Thanks for sharing and a star an wee flag fer ya


Peace and love and no drugs
-nat cat-



posted on Oct, 4 2013 @ 08:41 AM
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Thanks Nat! I appreciate you and your comments!

edit on 4-10-2013 by abeverage because: non-divine intervention.




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