edit on 28-9-2013 by Ptenjakin because: (no
The effects at the beginning/middle really muddle the sound. Also, the chorus(or whatever :51 is) is really really bad. Also with those type of vocals
have you tried adding any reverb? The verse is fine but adding a strong bass line to back up the piano would sound better after the initial verse. All
in all the chorus didn't fit and the effects made it sound muddied(probably caused by whatever limiter you applied when mastering). The verse has a
lot of promise though if you just tweak it some.
Wow this a tough one to critique. It seemed rushed, too fast in some parts. Some parts I liked and others I didn't. I think it has potential if you
re-work it somehow. Difficult for me to articulate, maybe I'll have to listen again.
Dude...that's awesome!!!!!! I really like it. I just found out that I got published a couple of years ago after receiving royalties from BMI. A song
of mine titled "December" was used in a film titled ""Winter of Frozen Dreams". Now I'm working with Ken Lampl...it's a great feeling.
You got great stuff. Keep up the great work and follow your dreams, some may not like it, but millions hopefully will.
I think I would like it more if done with a live band. The very first line of the lyrics made me think it was coming in at the second verse. Not sure
why they struck me that way, they just did. As some one else said, it needs a bass line. And even though it wasn't there I could imagine a wicked
guitar solo in there. It has potential. but as others said, needs a little reworking.
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