posted on Sep, 21 2013 @ 11:38 AM
Simply put, your number of lines is to many. You need to use the horizontal space you are wasting. Try using comas separators and combine 2 lines
into one.....like this below:
and as the windshield melts and my tears evaporate, leaving only charcoal to defend
finally i understand the feelings of the few, ashes and diamonds foe and friend
we were all equal in the end -Roger Waters
Other than that, you are pretty much out of luck IMO.