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posted on Sep, 19 2013 @ 11:33 AM

Crimson stars blazed behind as she went
Buried in a pit is where she'll be sent

Tears of scarlet, stain her pale face
All she can hear is 'you're a disgrace'

She has no rights and fire is the rain
Lets out a shriek, of agony and pain

Lifts her glass arms and shouts to the sky
As the stars explode...she whispers goodbye

peace and love
-nat the blue eyed cat-

edit on 19-9-2013 by natalia because: (no reason given)

posted on Sep, 19 2013 @ 12:02 PM
reply to post by natalia

That works a treat!

Nicely done!

posted on Sep, 19 2013 @ 12:06 PM
RED: Retired and Extremely Dangerous.

posted on Sep, 19 2013 @ 12:28 PM
Very nice. I can feel it..And nice picture to

posted on Sep, 19 2013 @ 02:04 PM
I love the imagery your poem creates!

posted on Sep, 19 2013 @ 02:21 PM
Thanks to you that replied to my poem. I appreciate it. I still haven't figured out how to reply to all of you in one reply or whatever..oh well.

Anyway. Thanks again for reading what I wrote. I wrote it this morning. I had already written the poem called red, but I ended up changing some words and switching it around just a tiny.

Hope you all have a wonderful day, afternoon and evening.

Peace and Love to you all

posted on Sep, 25 2013 @ 11:42 PM
reply to post by natalia

I liked it and your imagery is powerful as usual!

Thanks Nat !

Peace to you!


posted on Sep, 27 2013 @ 02:24 AM
reply to post by natalia

That's awesome Natalia,

love the picture too.



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