The soul survivor. [AAC]

Let's talk about my dishy Janet
who travels from planet to planet
lands her pyramid
in which she can sit
to relish a glorious sunset.

One day she came down to my city
on pillars of fire - reentry
she put on town square
her pyramid there
my gawd was her triangle pretty.

I could not resist to discover
why such a large house seemed to hover
I entered her place
and gazed at her face
at first sight I knew that I loved her.

She sat there observing the distance
reflecting her lonely existence
at dawn the next day
departing Pompeii
we turned it to ash in an instance.

reply to post by D.Wolf


I liked it
Good job and thanks for sharing

reply to post by natalia


More I can not ask for. It was my pleasure .Thanx Nat.



Here's a blue eyed kitty for ya.

What does the AAC stand for?

Sincerely, AAC

reply to post by AnAbsoluteCreation



I guess it stands for AnAbsoluteCreation writing contest

You can find more about it HERE.