Why so alone?

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posted on Jun, 27 2013 @ 10:07 AM
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Just so there isn't any pretenses I am still in school so it might not be the best thing in the world.

A bit of my poetry:

Why is there silence when the phone rings?
The uneasy feeling for the joy it brings.
Not a person among us has to heart to break.
Let's express our hatred by destroying what others make.

Now a question for you. Why so alone?
Why so alone?
Why so alone?
Why so alone?
Can't you see you're on your own.

Contradictions that dictate force.
For those who lavish in hell have no remorse.
See a life that drowns many in superficiality.
Predictable to the person who discerns reality.

Now a question for you. Why so alone?
Why so alone?
Why so alone?
Why so alone?
Can't you see you're on your own.

To live in solitude and never forget.
To destroy the humanity that they have never met.
Ascending to darkness a fable of deceit.
Pursuing the destruction and denying defeat.

Now a question for you. Why so alone?
Why so alone?
Why so alone?
Why so alone?
Can't you see you're on your own.




posted on Jun, 27 2013 @ 10:23 AM
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edit on 27-6-2013 by ObservingYou because: (no reason given)



posted on Jun, 27 2013 @ 10:39 AM
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I like it


Thanks for sharing this.

I share my poetry in the short stories forum. I have seen some poetry here though too so I guess either forum is fine


I enjoyed the read


-nat the blue eyed cat-



posted on Jun, 27 2013 @ 10:46 AM
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Thanks!



posted on Jun, 28 2013 @ 10:11 AM
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Very good.

I love darker poetry like this.

I'll be on the look out for more of your work, meanwhile check out my latest short story if you like here:www.abovetopsecret.com...

is the title a play on the joker when he says "Why so serious"?



posted on Jun, 29 2013 @ 05:02 AM
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Originally posted by CagliostroTheGreat
is the title a play on the joker when he says "Why so serious"?


To be honest, this came to me in a very short dream-So I wouldn't know.



posted on Jun, 29 2013 @ 12:32 PM
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Nice poem, you definitely have some talent and a positive message to bring through. It would be awesome lyrics for a song. Keep at it



posted on Jun, 30 2013 @ 04:44 AM
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It would. The only complication is that I wouldn't be the one performing.



posted on Jun, 30 2013 @ 02:16 PM
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Originally posted by ScorchedFire
reply to post by FreeThinkerbychoice
 

It would. The only complication is that I wouldn't be the one performing.



Nope, you'd just be the genius behind the curtains



posted on Jun, 30 2013 @ 05:03 PM
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Genius is a bit of a strong word don't you think?



posted on Jul, 3 2013 @ 04:58 PM
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Originally posted by ScorchedFire
reply to post by FreeThinkerbychoice
 

Genius is a bit of a strong word don't you think?






A genius is a person who displays exceptional intellectual ability, creativity, or originality, typically to a degree that is associated with the achievement of unprecedented insight. There is no scientifically precise definition of genius, and the question of whether the notion itself has any real meaning has long been a subject of debate.


You be the judge





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