Song I wrote titled "I"

Hope you guys enjoy this one...Lyrics on the bottom.

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**LYRICS**

I wanna trust your words
Written in a verse
But the melody's a curse

I wanna trust your lips
But there's poison in your kiss
And it hits me like a fist

Why do I wait
What do you say we do?
Go all the way
Or get all away from you

I don't feel it
I don't love you
So let's quit this now

I don't need it
I don't want you
It's been quiet for a while

I thought we were a team
But I'm holding up this beam
There's nothing to redeem

Now I see us divided into two
Us is me and you
Our purple's red and blue

Why do I wait
What do you say we do?
Go all the way
Or get all away from you

I don't feel it
I don't love you
So let's quit this now

I don't need it
I don't want you
It's been quiet for a while

I don't feel it
I don't love you
So let's quit this now

I don't need it
I don't want you
It's been quiet for a while

I like it. It's got a Phil Collins retro eighties feel to it. Nice one

Good job Alex... I like it bro...I like your voice.

Exactly how I feel at the moment. I don't need it, I don't want you...I'm going to listen to this a couple of more times and sing with it.

reply to post by Johnny76


Thanks! After I wrote this song, I realized the piano part kind of had that feel too!

reply to post by PurpleVortex


Hope it helps with whatever you're facing man! Thanks for listening and singing with it!

Beautiful as always!!!! You should be famous. You have the talent.



Put the code after the = sign and get rid of the & sign and everything after.

The link is

www.youtube.com...

see the www.youtube.com...
you don't need any of that

when you hit reply, look for the 'vid youtube' button then click on that. It will open a tiny box where you copy your code then click ok and it will appear in your reply.
put in the 2IMxUrwanHI

get rid of the &feature=youtu.be

Now you try.

Very well done! I've written poetry for many years but I always found song writing very challenging. You're a natural. This could be a hit song.

reply to post by Night Star


There we go! didnt realize those buttons were there! thnks!

reply to post by LoneCloudHopper2


Thank you! I love poetry as well and that's where I started. As I grew older I kept trying to mix words and music together. It's been a long road and it's still going. It's crazy listening to my older material and comparing it to now.

Realized I put in an older edit of the song Whoops!

Originally posted by Ptenjakin
reply to post by Night Star

 

There we go! didnt realize those buttons were there! thnks!

I didn't either at first. You're very welcome.