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posted on May, 11 2013 @ 11:36 AM
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Three friends sat at the table
Strong drink was the staple
One was very drunk and talked a lot of lies
His monstrous incoherent rambling filled the skies
Another sitting there listening , saw with new eyes
A new reality dawned to her friends features
And they became like vultures , demon creatures
And seeing for the first time
She looked into her mates eyes
For then she knew , she was one too
Ha , he laughed , look at you.
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posted on May, 13 2013 @ 12:51 AM
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Wow friend. That was good.
good job.
Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed.
-nat



posted on May, 13 2013 @ 01:03 AM
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Thanks, nat . It's a bit dark , but all life aspects can be covered. Cheers 1%



posted on May, 13 2013 @ 01:19 AM
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I feel my dark poetry is some of my best.
It comes from deep within. This one was deep to me

-nat



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