Robot 2

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posted on May, 4 2013 @ 06:40 PM
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Melded to the chair,

can't move.

Feeling hard to bare,

please improve.

Torch blazing hot,

begins to loosen.

I am a Robot,

terrible confusion.

Get up now,

don't try to flee.

Take a rusty bow,

this isn't me.

Hollow inside.

Is this right?

Nowhere to hide,

full of fright.

Tries to step forward,

falls apart.

Is now cornered,

nowhere to start.

~nat the blue eyed cat~
edit on 4-5-2013 by natalia because: one lil error




posted on May, 5 2013 @ 02:57 AM
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Nat I love your writing, it always makes me sit back and think a bit harder.
Thank you
Cody



posted on May, 5 2013 @ 06:00 AM
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It always flows from the heart with you nat thats for sure. And codys right. Always thought provoking. Thanks for posting



posted on May, 6 2013 @ 01:57 AM
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natalia, You've done it again. I just love to read your poems and other efforts here. As Tony the Tiger would say, "You're the g-r-e-a-t-e-s-t!" BTW, I love your new avatar...she's so pretty.
My lil angel looks a bit down trodden.
Lol.



posted on May, 7 2013 @ 09:28 AM
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Thanks Nat! It really makes one pause and think what would the mind of a robot think? What would its understanding be of its existence? Would it feel fear or concern for its safety? Now I will ponder for awhile!
Thanks again friend!

grayeagle



posted on May, 7 2013 @ 09:34 AM
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to everyone

This one had been sitting in my journal for a bit and I figured I would share it.
All you guys are the best!!
and I appreciate the kind words
Peace and love to all~~
-nat cat-



posted on May, 9 2013 @ 05:05 AM
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Thats awesome. For some reason I found myself imagining the robot reading this poem surrounded by his/her/its peers, all in tweeds and smoking large pipes full of magnesium instead of shag tobacco, and commenting on the deep nature of the words. Great job!



posted on May, 9 2013 @ 05:58 AM
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Very talented you are my friend.
We all have different feelings in different moments of our lives. .

I love your threads.



posted on May, 13 2013 @ 08:32 PM
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Nice work! We are all a little robotic sometimes, following the mantra of; wake, work, sleep, wake, work, sleep . . . repeat repeat repeat.

"Like my great uncle Alphonse always use to say, 'when you do t know where to start, go back to the beginning.'"





 
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