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posted on Mar, 4 2013 @ 09:26 AM
The reception for my first post was very good (thank you to everyone who gave it a chance & provided your honest feedback) so by request here is another, please enjoy!


Strawberry, vanilla, chocolate: Swirl
Sweetly, softly, sexy: Girl
Body, mind, and spirit: Twirl
Intoxicating feeling, reeling: Whirl

Secret, secret, secret: Tell
Just met you, yet I know you well,
Obsession, repression, confession: Hell
Falling, falling, falling: Fell

Injury and drastic measure,
Awaited me, I sought the treasure,
Pound of pain for ounce of pleasure,
Black and red from white and azure...

Leaving, leaving, leaving: Gone
My nights of bliss have turned to dawn,
As one last chorus ends the song,
Hope love returns before too long...

posted on Mar, 4 2013 @ 11:36 AM
I really enjoyed it. You could just imagine a famous tv star saying it in an ad on tv! And i love cake. And that cake certainly looks lovely in the picture. Thanks for sharing this


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