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posted on Feb, 2 2013 @ 10:54 PM
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Spiritual being, where have you departed?

Gliding over a vacant sea.

Droplets flow sideways through this divine messenger.

The reflection gazes downward upon the sea of shattered glass.

Broken pieces shower the crests of the waves.

Spiritual being, where have you departed?

~nat~
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posted on Feb, 2 2013 @ 11:34 PM
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That's some deep stuff.
I like.
Keep up the good work.



posted on Feb, 2 2013 @ 11:44 PM
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Originally posted by GmoS719
That's some deep stuff.
I like.
Keep up the good work.


Thanks. I'm kind of a deep person.

Your kind words are very nice.

Peace and love
~nat in a hat~



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 12:06 AM
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Originally posted by natalia

Originally posted by GmoS719
That's some deep stuff.
I like.
Keep up the good work.


Thanks. I'm kind of a deep person.

Your kind words are very nice.

Peace and love
~nat in a hat~


Got anymore?
Or will I have to wait for future threads?



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 03:46 AM
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Nice writing nat, Well thought out to my friend



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 03:53 AM
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Hi Natalia, That was wonderful! You have a good heart, a gentle spirit, and a beautiful soul!
I hope you will write more!!



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 04:31 AM
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Originally posted by TheDoctor46
Nice writing nat, Well thought out to my friend


Thank you my friend!
Your very kind.
Peace to you
Nat the caged bat



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 04:32 AM
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Originally posted by shrevegal
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Hi Natalia, That was wonderful! You have a good heart, a gentle spirit, and a beautiful soul!
I hope you will write more!!


Thank you so much!

I've read your poetry as well and it's just wonderfully written.

I write a lot, it just get hectic, being a mom and wife.

Peace to you
Nat on a mat
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posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 04:34 AM
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posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 04:46 AM
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Oh wow, I'm a newbie and didn't realize I was doing anything wrong. Someone that posted at another thread mentioned it might be o.k. to put poems here. I guess they were mistaken. I noticed some folks put music writings/words here and since music is kinda like poetry I thought it would be o.k? Maybe the mods can tell me where to go...tho, I guess you already pretty much did that.
Hugs anyway and Blessing and kindest regards.



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 04:53 AM
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This is the place to write, Its fine. Keep writing!



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 05:19 PM
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Greetings M'Lady and friend .

At the risk of incurring your wrath because "nobody likes an I told you so", I told you your stuff was good !

Reading the replies that have already piled up I can't help but notice that I'm not the only one who thinks so. Like most men my eyes start to glaze over at the mere mention of the word "poetry", but I think your poetry is genuinely good, you do an amazing job of painting both picture and mood with very few words .

Keep em' coming .



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 10:31 PM
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Thank you so much for your kind words.

So funny your description of when you hear the word poetry! Haha

Glad you like them and thanks again for reading and commenting as well!

Peace and love
-nat the blue eyed cat-
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posted on Feb, 19 2013 @ 12:20 PM
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Awesome poem.

Reminds me of some of the things i used to write.

Very short, but backed with extraordinary meaning and depth, like a stamp in time.

I especially like the beginning and ending lines being the same, that ties back to the unknown.

An all-encompassing and whole vastness.

Empty yet full.



posted on Feb, 19 2013 @ 12:26 PM
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Thanks!

Ive always written poetry but a friend on here has been helping me to be more in depth.

I appreciate your feedback, means a lot.


Peace and love
-nat the mellow cat-





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