Men in Black

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posted on Feb, 2 2013 @ 05:29 PM
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They can move in a flash

If they see you they'll dash

Unless their in disguise

Then they will fool most

But will seem like a ghost

Like walking skeletons

Dressed in shrouded black cloaks

They cannot blink

They'll make you sink

There piercing gaze

Will set ablaze

Their ever slack

Their the Men In Black




posted on Feb, 2 2013 @ 05:32 PM
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did you really make that yourself,? that was good...
good word play, man..



posted on Feb, 2 2013 @ 10:58 PM
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Very nice my friend.

Rhymes seem to roll off the tongue so easy. I enjoyed.

Share more!


Peace and love
~nat in a hat~



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 04:11 AM
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Khedwulf, That was awesome! Keep on writing for us if you can.
Ever meet those suckers? I have...you describe them well.
I had one interlude with them, I think I scared them!
Blessings and best regards.



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 04:15 AM
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posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 05:00 AM
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Oh, now I see what your dealy is and what you're about. Have fun. Folks are writing their thoughts and feelings and sharing with words from the heart. Not nice to stomp on someones feelings but some folks just enjoy that sort of thing I suppose.



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 05:02 AM
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I certainly didn't mean to stomp on anyone's feelings but proper grammar, especially in poetry, is important.

I'm sorry you don't recognize that.



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 06:05 AM
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I don't recognize you....oh wait...actually, I do.

I just love making new friends.



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 11:29 AM
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I like this story, the men in black ~ sounds a bit mysterious
very good post



posted on Feb, 3 2013 @ 01:56 PM
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Originally posted by shrevegal
reply to post by Khedwulf
 

Khedwulf, That was awesome! Keep on writing for us if you can.
Ever meet those suckers? I have...you describe them well.
I had one interlude with them, I think I scared them!
Blessings and best regards.



I have never met them, this poem is a compilation of all of the research I have done on them. Combined with some of my own theories.


Originally posted by Spookycolt



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You should use "they're" in this situation.


I know, I realized that four hours after I made the post.



posted on Feb, 4 2013 @ 02:14 PM
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Your story was very interesting and insightful. I see you are a researcher of such matters as well.
I have been researching the ufo/alien phenomenon for over 20 years. It is a very intriguing hobby of mine and lends it self well if one wishes to write stories about such as you have done. I will be putting a Fiction type story here soon about an alien encounter and a tribute to the Astronauts as well. I hope folks will enjoy those.

I have several photos I've taken of unusual craft, (not the grainy type stuff) but not very adept at computer skills and how to submit same.

I hope you write more similar stories as the one above...was way cool! Blessings and kindest regards.





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