The day began with a whisper

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posted on Jan, 28 2013 @ 06:14 PM
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The day began with a whisper.

Then slowly turned into a furious howl.

Halt in the manipulation of my imagination.

I'm paddling up a river, in a stream of solitude.

Gut wrenching ideas strike me down like a cannon.

Are you actually in hysterics?

I can't account how this is comical.

Dismantle my consideration.

I will sorrowfully rebel.

Ridicule me.

I will rise and fall as a helium balloon.

Please persuade me to be steady.

You're accomplishing your manipulation.

~nat~




posted on Jan, 29 2013 @ 08:51 AM
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Nice work again nat. Wish i could write something meaningful on paper



posted on Jan, 29 2013 @ 08:55 AM
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Originally posted by TheDoctor46
Nice work again nat. Wish i could write something meaningful on paper


Thank you thank you, my kind friend.

Peace and love
-nat



posted on Feb, 1 2013 @ 07:35 AM
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You would be great as a singer of a band.. Very deep, powerful, subtle writing that I could imagine sounding wonderful as lyrics... Have you ever considered? Regardless your poetry is enjoyable so keep up the good work



posted on Feb, 1 2013 @ 08:21 AM
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Originally posted by ImaFungi
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You would be great as a singer of a band.. Very deep, powerful, subtle writing that I could imagine sounding wonderful as lyrics... Have you ever considered? Regardless your poetry is enjoyable so keep up the good work


Thanks!

My friends have asked me to sing with them, but very hard to when I have a kid and a hubby.

I may though, it's just when they get together...I usually can't join.


Thanks again for your kind words.

Peace and love -nat



posted on Feb, 5 2013 @ 05:19 PM
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Originally posted by natalia

Originally posted by ImaFungi
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You would be great as a singer of a band.. Very deep, powerful, subtle writing that I could imagine sounding wonderful as lyrics... Have you ever considered? Regardless your poetry is enjoyable so keep up the good work


Thanks!

My friends have asked me to sing with them, but very hard to when I have a kid and a hubby.

I may though, it's just when they get together...I usually can't join.


Thanks again for your kind words.

Peace and love -nat


You should do it once a week give yourself a fun night out doing something you enjoy!

We all know you can write touchingly...

But...can you sing?



posted on Feb, 5 2013 @ 08:53 PM
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Haha! I have game night once a month. Bunco!! Whoop whoop!

Well, i think I can sing. My friends like my raspy voice.


Peace and love
-nat the blue eyed cat-



posted on Feb, 5 2013 @ 08:58 PM
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OK..

This one gets a wow --->


Nicely done.



posted on Feb, 6 2013 @ 06:40 PM
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Thanks a lot slayer69.

That face is funny.

Peace and love
-nat the tranquil cat-





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