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Brain Food - Spoken Word :) What do you think?

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posted on Jan, 23 2013 @ 05:17 PM
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How many silly la-lables are possible
to maintain claim in the brain of a deranged model dame?
Stunningly cunning – let me be forthcoming
No tongue in cheek
Ill speak it clearly so you hear me
It only takes a couple phrases to unlace your brain braces
Replace those blank gazes with expressions of basis
Lose your train of thought?
You didn’t misplace it I erased it
Chk-Chk deleted all the cases of your idiocrasis
Went back again to sweep for traces
It was that blatant
I’m sayin – it’s such a disgrace
What a grave waste of space!
I’ve tried to be patient with your blubbering
Nonsensical utterings – pause for a second
Does a point come with all of this muttering?
Stu-stuttering lies, making ish up as you go by?
Oh my – I’ve tried to keep up with your story yo.
But honestly? You lost my focus like an hour ago.
H I J K yeah L M N O – I always flow with those
And 18 other letters in tow – what’s that?
Oh. Did I digress?
It’s probably best – your insolence was getting vexing
With your extra suspect lefts
Correct your steps ‘fore you step foot at the line – or don’t toe
Come on people time to get back in the know
Throw three rolls you don’t know and sorry Joe don’t pass go
Take heed the wisdom I bestow
Don’t try to common noun me
I’ll knock you proper first round
Leave you shook – with your phonics unhooked
And take your monotonic monophonic monosyllabic songbook
Did you catch that?
Next time honestly look – try to gather enough thoughts to record them
If you can afford them, because I know your good ideas die of boredom.
It’s of no importance. Just report back your performance when your rapport is in accordance.





posted on Jan, 23 2013 @ 05:40 PM
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thanks for posting the lyrics, as i was distracted watching the video by all the debauchery's i was thinking i would like to perform on that woman.




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posted on Jan, 23 2013 @ 05:54 PM
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Calma down boy,sit.



posted on Jan, 23 2013 @ 06:01 PM
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Are you sure the OP isn't the woman in the video?

You may need to insert foot into mouth.


Oh yea, I like the rhyme. Very good.
She is empirically lyrically.
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posted on Jan, 23 2013 @ 06:30 PM
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Ah indeed I am the lady in the video - just sharing my hobby with my favorite website!!! Glad you liked it - haha empirically lyrically - I really like that actually mind if I use it at a later date? Off topic though - your avatar kinda freaks me out. Always been afraid of clowns.



posted on Jan, 23 2013 @ 06:30 PM
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At least your honest!

Thanks for making an attempt to stay focused good sir.



posted on Jan, 23 2013 @ 06:45 PM
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Originally posted by AnonyJai
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Ah indeed I am the lady in the video - just sharing my hobby with my favorite website!!! Glad you liked it - haha empirically lyrically - I really like that actually mind if I use it at a later date? Off topic though - your avatar kinda freaks me out. Always been afraid of clowns.




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No problem, empirically lyrically is now yours. I like to rhyme but I'm nowhere as smooth as you. I would get like 8 or so lines in and brain freeze.

Sorry about the avatar. I've often wondered if people who dislike clowns are freaked out by it. I guess the answer is yes. I've thought about changing it but I have to be in a creative mood to do so and lately I haven't been in one.



posted on Jan, 23 2013 @ 06:51 PM
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Excellent I will def incorporate it into a new verse! People with even sporadic rhyming skills can still be super helpful to lyricists. Sometimes all it takes is someone saying one clever line and I go off on a tangent and get a whole verse out of it. Love when that happens haha!


ETA: No apology necessary on the avatar! When I see a clown I freeze for a split second and my brain has an AH! Real Monsters kind of moment and then I'm fine.

edit on 23-1-2013 by AnonyJai because: ETA




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