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Originally posted by Chansi3
You don't. You can't You won't. Non expression is just as gratifying as self expression, except when you try to present it as wall text grafiti. Nice try, but just missed the mark by a teeny weeny bit. Please try again without context and without jibber jabber. Your talking about, just went south with your walk about.
Originally posted by Rikku
reply to post by wwwchronos
well i kinda like it the way you already said it.
well, i wouldnt call iot chariming.
but you could say its you special skill.
Originally posted by Advantage
Originally posted by Chansi3
You don't. You can't You won't. Non expression is just as gratifying as self expression, except when you try to present it as wall text grafiti. Nice try, but just missed the mark by a teeny weeny bit. Please try again without context and without jibber jabber. Your talking about, just went south with your walk about.
The "jibber jabber" made it what it is! It was his stream of consciousness post... thats the AWESOME part of it. There are posts in threads for discussion, and there are expressive posts from the psyche. This is the latter. Given, its not for everyone.. but I do enjoy it when its sincere and off the cuff.
Originally posted by Wrabbit2000
Originally posted by Advantage
Originally posted by Chansi3
You don't. You can't You won't. Non expression is just as gratifying as self expression, except when you try to present it as wall text grafiti. Nice try, but just missed the mark by a teeny weeny bit. Please try again without context and without jibber jabber. Your talking about, just went south with your walk about.
The "jibber jabber" made it what it is! It was his stream of consciousness post... thats the AWESOME part of it. There are posts in threads for discussion, and there are expressive posts from the psyche. This is the latter. Given, its not for everyone.. but I do enjoy it when its sincere and off the cuff.
You know, I can honestly say I have never looked at a post as a "stream of consciousness" before. I'll tell ya what though. I went back and read the whole OP in THAT context instead of trying to make mental sense of paragraph break points (which is hopeless there) and I surprised myself. it makes sense when read THAT way.
I can really say I learned something new here. No sarcasm at all. I'll even say that the OP seems well traveled and experienced, if the text is looked at as an uncontrolled flow he just allowed to pour through the keyboard? Indeed. What first comes off as the ramblings of someone who might set new records on the breathalyzer, actually does have a flow and logic. I guess context really is everything sometimes and thanks for the suggestive one here.
@OP
I take back the paragraph suggestion. Again, if read how Advantage suggests? Hey, I kinda like it. (wonders why everyone is suddenly looking at me funny)
I dont know what i talking about. Just dont know. Now thinking how life is beautiful and we people dont se it. I kniw i'll not have a time for ats. I regret a little because of that. Ive been in his house can u imagine it. Dont like flies, flies are ok, bht sometimes annoying. My will be a ummm dont know.
Originally posted by Wrabbit2000
The "jibber jabber" made it what it is! It was his stream of consciousness post... thats the AWESOME part of it. You know, I can honestly say I have never looked at a post as a "stream of consciousness" before. I'll tell ya what though. I went back and read the whole OP in THAT context instead of trying to make mental sense of paragraph break points (which is hopeless there) and I surprised myself. it makes sense when read THAT way.
Originally posted by wwwchronos
"Few days ago ive walking on grocery store outside. And 50 meters away ive seen some baby,jumping around, 2-3 years old. I come to child. And we staring one to another. Such a wondering, such a peace, such purity in eyes. I will never forget that. Always when remember thst child, it keep me calm, and bring smile on my face."