Hi, ya, My.... Poem I wrote, short and sweet, please enjoy, I hope you like

Would it be that, my sight is night and you are day?
Could we fulfill, a web of spider paint, oh window pane, what do you say?
Can you see me? it cannot be, but make me free you are the way
Still I'm up, across the path against the sun along the bay,
Wonder if i threw a stone across the river would you play?

By: Breen

reply to post by Kapablanka


Thanks for sharing. I love reading/writing poetry. To be honest, this was one the better poems I've come across on ATS

"web of spider paint" was one of the best images I ever tried to conjure up in my imagination