It looks like you're using an Ad Blocker.

Please white-list or disable in your ad-blocking tool.

Thank you.


Some features of ATS will be disabled while you continue to use an ad-blocker.


Follow the butterfly

page: 1

log in


posted on Dec, 5 2012 @ 11:29 PM
Follow the butterfly -

Mind is running heart is pounding
Feeling the truth is something outstanding

Feeling reeling letting go
Racing yet pacing need to take it slow

Pulled to a place called home
Strange yet it's a thread that I've sewn

Driving thriving because I need to know
The journey makes a forgotten part of me glow

Yearning and turning until I figure it out
Obstacles and distractions can't break the route

Like a magnet I'm drawn to the path
It works like simple math

I try to use old logic but I can't get it out of my head
I'm on a journey which I'll only understand when I'm dead

There is more to this ...
Luckily it's something of bliss.


posted on Dec, 6 2012 @ 12:05 AM
Beautifully succinct and simple poem... Nice work Liberius

posted on Dec, 7 2012 @ 01:04 AM

Originally posted by 1littlewolf
Beautifully succinct and simple poem... Nice work Liberius

Thank you sir!

posted on Dec, 8 2012 @ 03:00 AM
Great thread.

Maybe he understood the way before he died, or didn't after he died either, if he's dead already.

posted on Dec, 9 2012 @ 08:38 AM
Now that's good and has a certain truth.

I'd say it had a ryhthm that was dynamic,mirroring the subject matter but then i'd sound like i knew what i was talking about !!


top topics

log in