Did I forget to choose? Or did I choose to forget?

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posted on Dec, 1 2012 @ 05:52 PM
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This is my first attempt at writing a poem, please be gentle!




Did I forget to choose?
Or did I choose to forget?


I have traveled so far
To be exactly where we are

If the latter is true
Who are you?

If the latter is false
Do I still have a pulse?

The more I realize
The more I know
Confusion sets in
I begin to grow

Who casts the shadows I see on the wall?
Perhaps my inner light has grown much to bright after all

I do not fear the things I see
For those are mere reflections of the one and only ME

Did we forget to choose?
Or did we choose to forget?


We have traveled so far
To be exactly where we are

Who are you
If the former is true?

Do you still have a pulse
If the former is false?

The more we realize
The more we know
Confusion sets in
We begin to grow

We cast the shadows we see on the wall
Perhaps our inner light is much to bright after all

We need not fear the things we see
For they are mirror reflections of the one and only ME
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posted on Dec, 1 2012 @ 06:11 PM
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I don't know which one is cooler....your avatar or your poem. Or maybe you? They both appear to belong on a Pink Floyd album.

You take the subject of fear and you make it light somehow. Something that is easily managed and easy to overcome. What it needs now is the analogy of opening doors. When opportunity knocks, let the fear out and acceptance in.

The more I realize
The more I know
Confusion sets in
I begin to grow


That was very good.





posted on Dec, 1 2012 @ 06:31 PM
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Thank you for such kind words. *blush*



posted on Dec, 1 2012 @ 07:03 PM
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2nd




posted on Dec, 1 2012 @ 07:42 PM
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The words from a song were my inspiration



I see that you've come so far To be right where you are How old is your soul?



'Cause even the stars they burn Some even fall to the earth We've got a lot to learn


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posted on Dec, 1 2012 @ 10:34 PM
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Quit teasing me now.........what's the song?






posted on Dec, 1 2012 @ 11:18 PM
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*blush*

I kid I kid.


This it it I swear.



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posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 05:22 PM
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To the first video......
That was too cute.

To the second one.................nether will I




You know...............we're gonna have stop meeting like this.





posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 06:17 PM
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You know...............we're gonna have stop meeting like this.


How else do you propose we meet?


Is that Grace Potter in your signature link?

An old friend just introduced me to her the other day.



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 07:04 PM
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Have you heard this one before?


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posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 09:10 PM
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I've never heard it before but I've felt it.








posted on Dec, 3 2012 @ 09:58 PM
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2:35 ~ 3:25 is epic.

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posted on Dec, 6 2012 @ 09:50 PM
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Originally posted by SyntheticPerception

2:35 ~ 3:25 is epic.


Agreed ---
Epic.






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