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posted on Nov, 25 2012 @ 04:59 PM
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No

Don't go

Please come back

Wait

Please

I love you, I always have

You can't leave now, just when we've become close

Oh, God

No

Damn it, come back

I need you

I need you

Oh, crap

Damn

Why

Why just now

Damn

No

No

No

I can't handle this

I can't

I'm gutted

I love you

Damn it

I love you

I...
edit on 25/11/12 by masqua because: (no reason given)




posted on Nov, 26 2012 @ 11:33 AM
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That


Was


Very


Good!


I like that I can relate to the words. Short and to the point.

Have you suffered a recent break up or is this about losing someone?



posted on Nov, 26 2012 @ 12:36 PM
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reply to post by imawlinn
 


Strangely enough, considering the theme of this contest, my writing the piece is the very real result of a recent loss.

So, yes, the words ring true to my feelings.





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