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posted on Nov, 5 2012 @ 12:15 PM
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What Have I Done?

Did I speak it into existence?
Is it now a knife twisting in my heart?
Did I unleash what I cannot tame?
Does it now consume me?

I told her I love her.

I stripped myself to the vulnerable.
Will she respond to my nakedness?
I’m so far from shore,
and I’m a poor swimmer.

I told her I love her.

Why now?
Why here?
Why her?
Why me?

I told her I love her.

I’m unfair, unrealistic,
impatient and improper.
She needs time and space.
I see it on her face.

I told her I love her.

I’m so scared,
frightened of loneliness,
shamed by betrayal,
afraid of rejection.

I told her I love her.

I don’t know the rules,
I don’t understand the game.
To love and be loved,
just aren’t the same.

I told her I love her.
edit on 06/02/2011 by grayeagle because: gramar change.
edit on 06/02/2011 by grayeagle because: (no reason given)




posted on Nov, 5 2012 @ 12:43 PM
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First flag! Very nice poem my friend. Did she tell you she loved you back? Just curious.
edit on 5-11-2012 by imawlinn because: (no reason given)



posted on Nov, 5 2012 @ 01:11 PM
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No she didn't!



posted on Nov, 5 2012 @ 01:38 PM
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Great poem S&F and thanks for posting..peace,sugarcookie1





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