My Dirty Little Poem [CTPWC]

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posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 03:23 PM
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extraordinary tenderness of love
in that in silent ardour it caresses this one
her body, her smile, her speech,
her way of moving. In her flesh,
so holds the other...
I love and loved at once embraced
and known.
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posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 03:25 PM
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Beautiful!

If you are entering it in the contest, don't forget to add [CTPWC] in the title.



posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 03:28 PM
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Originally posted by smyleegrl
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Beautiful!

If you are entering it in the contest, don't forget to add [CTPWC] in the title.


I forgot. I'll do that in my next offering to the muse.



posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 03:36 PM
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Originally posted by olaru12

Originally posted by smyleegrl
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Beautiful!

If you are entering it in the contest, don't forget to add [CTPWC] in the title.


I forgot. I'll do that in my next offering to the muse.


You did it! Good for you, and I still say its a beautiful poem.
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posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 03:40 PM
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Originally posted by smyleegrl

Originally posted by olaru12

Originally posted by smyleegrl
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Beautiful!

If you are entering it in the contest, don't forget to add [CTPWC] in the title.


I forgot. I'll do that in my next offering to the muse.


You can edit it for four hours after its posted, or ask a mod to do it. It's to good of a poem to not be in the contest.


Bless your heart!!!

done...



posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 04:45 PM
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"Patriotism is a virtue of the vicious." "Always listen to people who say they are searching for truth, never those that say they have found it."You must become the change you want in the world." We should all be respectful of one another because war means mutual annihilation. Best Regards and keep-on Truckin.



posted on Nov, 5 2012 @ 02:52 PM
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Thanks for the sentiment but I'm not exactly what that has to do with "My Dirty Little Poem"





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