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posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 01:57 PM
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Hate
Love
Peace
War
This world is becoming a filthy whore.

You took my heart and made me cry;
Now it is my turn to say goodbye

Up
Down
Left
Right
No matter where I look, eternal night.

You took my heart, returned it in pieces.
As I read your letter and stroked the creases.

Forward
Backward
Sideways
Around
No matter where I listen, no living sound.

You took my heart, cut me to the bone.
You left me here all ALONE.


Under
Over
Out
In
The lines of reality are running thin

You took my heart when you took your life.
Oh how I miss you my darling wife.




edit on 4-11-2012 by Quadrivium because: TITLE
edit on 4-11-2012 by Quadrivium because: stupid auto correct!




posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 02:00 PM
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I think you lost people on the third word. Think about it. Maybe you could say your using poetic license?



posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 02:11 PM
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Originally posted by SinMaker
I think you lost people on the third word. Think about it. Maybe you could say your using poetic license?

Thanks for catching that

The auto correct on this phone is AWSOME! It tries to write for you, and it will if you're not careful



posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 11:05 PM
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Great entry.
Hope to see it get more flags.



posted on Nov, 5 2012 @ 10:21 AM
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Originally posted by MidnightSunshine
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Great entry.
Hope to see it get more flags.

Thanks Midnight, and thanks for the vote of confidence.



posted on Nov, 5 2012 @ 02:57 PM
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Very Good! Suicide the great multiplier of pain! Thanks for entering!



posted on Nov, 6 2012 @ 12:20 AM
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Originally posted by grayeagle
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Very Good! Suicide the great multiplier of pain! Thanks for entering!
thanks for reading it G.E. glad you enjoyed it.



posted on Nov, 6 2012 @ 01:29 AM
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Just stopping by for another read





posted on Nov, 6 2012 @ 11:26 AM
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Originally posted by MidnightSunshine
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Just stopping by for another read



Thanks again Midnight.



posted on Nov, 11 2012 @ 02:22 AM
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Ok. Just for the record, I am alive! No suicide here. I don't know where his mind was that night, but now I'm afraid, very afraid. Just kidding.
Sometimes he is a deep thinker. I can hear the wheels grinding and see the smoke coming out his ears from across the room. Scary sight to see.



posted on Nov, 11 2012 @ 12:15 PM
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Originally posted by GideonFaith
Ok. Just for the record, I am alive! No suicide here. I don't know where his mind was that night, but now I'm afraid, very afraid. Just kidding.
Sometimes he is a deep thinker. I can hear the wheels grinding and see the smoke coming out his ears from across the room. Scary sight to see.



OH #!!! HAHA I saw your introduction but forgot that awesome work above was written by your Hubby


That's good to hear


ALSO glad to see more flags for this one!!!



posted on Nov, 11 2012 @ 02:58 PM
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Originally posted by MidnightSunshine

Originally posted by GideonFaith
Ok. Just for the record, I am alive! No suicide here. I don't know where his mind was that night, but now I'm afraid, very afraid. Just kidding.
Sometimes he is a deep thinker. I can hear the wheels grinding and see the smoke coming out his ears from across the room. Scary sight to see.



OH #!!! HAHA I saw your introduction but forgot that awesome work above was written by your Hubby


That's good to hear


ALSO glad to see more flags for this one!!!


Yeah, some days I claim him, some days I'm not to sure about.
I am glad to see he is getting flags and stars for his talent.
Thank you.
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