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Love's Embrace [CTPWC]

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posted on Nov, 3 2012 @ 09:05 PM
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I am sitting here, thinking of you again.
The longing for things unseen, visions in my head.
I wonder what you are thinking, on this cold November night;
As I lie here alone, beneath this lone silent candle's light.

You have enchanted me... with your charming ways;
Your words have kept me warm, on dark and coldest days.
I wonder, can you feel me? As my heart is calling out;
A whirlwind of emotion; like fall leaves that are rustling about.

I sometimes think I hear you, calling me by name;
The ever-present glow of strong impassioned flame.
Curiosity fills my mind, your image dancing in my dreams;
You have become a river in my soul... a deep and flowing stream.

You have breathed new life into this soul, awakened lost desire;
An all new purpose for this life, a strong and raging fire.
In these aching musings, my heart quick does race;
At the thought of holding you close, caressing your sweet face.

I am staring at the moon now - full and oh so bright.
Imagination blooming in my mind; and streaming in it's light.
The wind is blowing now, as I wish that you were here;
Gently whispering to me, that you are always near.

"No matter what the distance, I am never far away;
I am forever with you, and in this heart to stay."
These sweet words ignite and illuminate my soul;
And have taken root in my heart as I am now made whole.

Everything has now become you; your essence lights the way;
Your name has been written in my soul for the remainder of it's days.
You are the author of all love that beats within this heart;
And no matter what the distance - we are never truly apart.

Not one knows how much time they have, as it is a fleeting thing;
No amount of money can equal how much joy to my days you bring.
There are so many things that are you, too many to suppose;
Always remember that you, and you alone, are my one and only rose.





































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posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 12:31 AM
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That was absolutely beautiful.



posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 01:03 AM
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Rubicant13
That was beautiful!Very powerful poem i can tell allot of your heart was put into to this very touching with amazing emotion..peace,sugarcookie1 S&F



posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 01:14 AM
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Wow that was truly beautiful Rubi. I aboslutely loved it! S&F
It spoke to my heart.............and told the story of true love no matter the distance or hardships.
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posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 02:58 AM
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Thank you for the kind comments. Very much appreciated. So many talented writers here on ATS. The level of the talent here is amazing.



posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 09:02 AM
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Thank you for sharing this with us Repubicant. It was beautiful. S+F

Quad



posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 10:36 AM
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Rubi that was so touching and emotional. It is hard to find words to express how it makes one feel. Truly awesome!



posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 10:43 AM
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Very wonderful words, for some reason I am thinking of the episode of cold case with that song in it....lol but I like yours better.

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posted on Nov, 5 2012 @ 10:03 PM
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Done Bro!


S&F

Very good too!



posted on Nov, 5 2012 @ 10:37 PM
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I really loved this one! It's going on my favorites list. I am so glad I do not have to be a judge and pick one poem for this contest, cause there is no way I could!

The whole thing was awesome, well crafted words, great imagery, good flow, not too long, not too short. Clean and simple but not childish. Very vivid. I loved the way the words read. For example:


I sometimes think I hear you, calling me by name;
The ever-present glow of strong impassioned flame.


That was my favorite part. It just made me feel warmth in my heart thinking about it. Good stuff!
S&F!



posted on Nov, 5 2012 @ 11:22 PM
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I genuinely appreciate the critique you gave... It made me smile that you loved this poem that much. Thank you very much for the kind words.



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