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An Ode to Kim K[CTPWC]

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posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 07:02 PM
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I sleep all day
its the only way
i can get away
from the day after day after day

I know its not a normal reaction
a mind split into fractions
by the normal distractions
of the multiple media factions

TV, newspaper, radio, internet
the mind numbing jet set
Im trying to forget
the upset and regret

of time wasted
trying to follow
the hollow
shallow
drivel dravel

So its off to sleep,
Another leap,

In to the empty
But its plenty

To not have to see.
or be seen.
On the obscene
High def
TV screen



edit on 2-11-2012 by TheBlackHat because: (no reason given)




posted on Nov, 3 2012 @ 01:54 AM
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Love it! The last stanza is perfect. We all have the desire to reach out and connect with another. Your poem conveys the overwhelming feelings of the modern experience of this "connection.". There's a little double meaning in there for ya! It is subtly done and expresses the sentiment of the contest well.



 
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