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posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 04:06 AM
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Sure as the ball will rise
Slip in thoughts of you.

Slow Squeezing So Softly
..a dream or two.

The light comes up.

The life pours in.

You’ll be there for me,
No time for dread.

All this I can see...

Just this glimpse,
Fast and quick.

Fill me with joy.

Inside my head.

You crazy boy...

Time for bed.
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posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 12:27 PM
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Nice, S+F! It's exactly what I hope women are thinking of me when they meet me.



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 12:32 PM
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This is another one of those poems that can have meanings to different people.
To me this was about the sun rise, and the sun set.. A day of joy full of life.. And leading into the night where dread has its way!

Or it could mean something more bedroom ish.hehe depends on the person, and how you read into it.

Good submission



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 01:48 PM
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Thanks guys


I wrote this a while ago, but I think it fits the biter/sweet theme of this contest. For me, it about not being able to be with someone (bitter) but, taking comfort in seeing them in your dreams(sweet). Thanks for reading
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posted on Nov, 6 2012 @ 11:34 AM
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Thanks for submitting this Midnight. I enjoyed it. I got the feeling that you and your other had been up all night.........well.....anyway, once the sun is up its nighty nite time
S&F



posted on Nov, 6 2012 @ 11:39 AM
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Thanks Quad! Yes we are together almost every night. Right up here (tap tap).

Read Playing in the Street, its much better....



posted on Nov, 9 2012 @ 03:40 AM
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Goodnight Sunshine





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