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reply to post by sonnny1

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To walk in between
The ultimate unseens
And life what does it mean
Between the might-have-beens

My favorite lines...those words really dig into the heart of me. This was amazing, you are a gifted writer sonny! I really loved this one....it was like swimming in my own dark waters. S&Fx10.

Thanks for sharing this one
Mija

reply to post by Mijamija

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Why thank You.



Sometimes, when your in the dark, a few gems of reality, happen to make their way out of it.

reply to post by sonnny1

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I agree. Isnt it terribly beautiful that out of our worst pain, some of our best creations are made? Light and dark, they cannot be separated really, they need each other....or at least so it seems with me, especially when I write.


And i write a lot about darkness and light, and also the inbetweens....the grey. Nowadays, I am mostly grey....in the middle....in between. Touching neither side, trapped, haunted. I feel like the unseen, and so think that is why those words of yours got me the way they did.

It also was nice to hear and see a distinct style in your poem, I think that was awesome, again great work!

reply to post by Rubicant13

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Thank You, for the kind words........

reply to post by sonnny1

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To say, "Your writing is superb"
would not do justice
to what you have wrought.

So then, all I can say to you
is what's in my mind:
"Thanks, sonnny. Thank you."

~Mike

reply to post by JustMike

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Thanks Mike for the kind words, Do appreciate them.

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