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posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 03:03 AM
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Someone has to know

Which way the river flows

Oh, how far does it go

My burning bridges glow



To walk in between

The ultimate unseens

And life what does it mean

Between the might-have-beens





And miles Around, come crashing to the ground

Whose future abounds, so the lost can be found

And if I look away, my eyes will betray

This voice with no sound, the silence so loud





Time and Tides to cry

To Breathe with a sigh

That all my thoughts tonight

Burning in the light



Destiny to claim

Honesty through shame

Honestly I say

Walking through the flames






And miles Around, come crashing to the ground

Whose future abounds, so the lost can be found

And if I look away, my eyes will betray

This voice with no sound, the silence so loud

















For G
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posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 03:07 AM
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You know, I am just blown away by the calibre of writing that this contest is bringing out!

SnF, my friend. Well done!



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 03:11 AM
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Thank You Beez.



Poetry is my favorite type of writing.

I might just add the voice to it, and put it up on Youtube. You might be surprised.



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 03:13 AM
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Oh hell yes! Link it if you do!



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 03:42 AM
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Lovely,
why are there
tears
on my cheek?



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 05:17 AM
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Enjoyed it very much. I can relate. Let us know abut the youtube deal.



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 07:36 AM
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Thank You very much, for the kind words.




posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 07:37 AM
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Originally posted by Iamschist
Enjoyed it very much. I can relate. Let us know abut the youtube deal.


Thank You........



I just have to get the time to record it. Maybe this weekend........



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 08:12 AM
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I have to agree with everyone so far. Nicely done my friend



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 08:23 AM
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Very nice...

i have to agree with all previous comments... this is fantastic

i never realized how many poets frequented ATS....



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 08:25 AM
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Thank you Brother.

Appreciate the kind words.




posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 08:27 AM
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Originally posted by Ph03n1x
Very nice...

i have to agree with all previous comments... this is fantastic

i never realized how many poets frequented ATS....




Why, Thank You.

You have the gift also..............






posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 11:23 AM
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And miles Around, come crashing to the ground Whose future abounds, so the lost can be found


Beautiful work there Sonny1! that line really hooked me in.. And I can feel this way written with much heart and much emotion. It comes through deeply in your work here! SnF from me on this work!
One of your best submissions yet !



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 06:13 PM
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Thank You very much.

You are too kind.




posted on Nov, 3 2012 @ 05:45 PM
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Wonderful submission sonnny1 i enjoyed the read ..peace,sugarcookie1 S&F



posted on Nov, 3 2012 @ 08:48 PM
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Thank You sugarcookie................


I do appreciate it.




posted on Nov, 3 2012 @ 08:57 PM
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That was a beautiful walk through your words. S&F



posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 09:01 AM
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What is [ctpwc] ?



posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 09:20 AM
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I appreciate the kind words, Thank You.




posted on Nov, 4 2012 @ 09:22 AM
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Originally posted by nakiel
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